Faulty. my new single - released today.

haim
haim World
edited January 8 in Original Songs for review

Hi guys, thank you all for your kind comments on my previous song. Appreciate it and it was very pleasant to read.

This time I recorded the song once again, with just guitar and me, but I've added another element. I think it's again a genuine song, one of my most genuine songs written in the last few years. I'm happy to share it with you lovely people. Enjoy listening, Haim.

https://listen.haimshim.com/faulty

Lyrics (taken from my website haimshim.com):

Falling down, turn around

After all the pain that I found

Falling down


Lonely now, found somehow

Not to trust nobody but God

Lonely now


And every time I look around me

It’s you I find

And all the memories attacking my mind

Ohh.. ohh..


Faulty, I’m not guilty

But lately all I’m able to see

I’m faulty


And every time I look around me

It’s you I find

And all the memories attacking my mind

Ohh.. ohh..


How could you leave

I’ve got so much more to give

I never meant to let you down

Oh…..


And every time I look around me

It’s you I find

And all the memories attacking my mind

Ohh.. ohh..

Comments

  • Always good to hear your music Haim. Sounds like a personal song, indeed very genuine. This is beautifully crafted. You have a fabulous voice and a terrific range. Your guitar playing is great too and I like the way the stings come in without ever being over the top. I can offer no criticism because this is excellent. 😀

  • 'stings'?!! I meant strings🙄

  • Wonderful performance. Your vocals are always so strong!

    I like the dynamic contrasts between verse / chorus / bridge

    Emotionally this feels like a long moan (and I mean that in a positive sense) - very intense!

    In terms of the recording, it feels integrated and tight without anything superfluous.

    Another great song!

  • You've composed and recorded another very enjoyable song, Haim! Great vocals, guitar work, and the simple arrangement fits the vibe of the song well! Keep the good songs coming in 2023! 😀

  • Your singing is lovely, full of emotions!

    I can feel your intense pain, and plead for understanding and forgiveness.

    I love the long Oooooohhhhs.

    Well done.

    Rene

  • abc4
    abc4 Northwest arkansas

    Great song ! Seems like you are restrained in your delivery, bet you could wail if you wanted to.

  • Beautiful falsetto. Key of B flat. Great for the Male voice. Nice work!

  • It is so easy to get lost in the music and vocals. The emotion pours out and I feel it in your performance. A wonderful and captivating song. Beautiful!

  • abc4
    abc4 Northwest arkansas

    Well, outstanding all the way around ! I will check out some more of your songs.

  • Thank you, enjoy!

    Thank you all for the comments and for listening, Appreciated, Haim.

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