When You Cry

Here is a new song from my new album "Dark, Beautiful World." "It's called "When You Cry." The full album will be released next Monday 3/11, including the full track list and me sharing a new song each day after.

When You Cry

Verse 1 (Slow, somber piano with strings)
Tears falling, heart breaking by the second
Oh God, tell me how'd it come to this
All the times that she didn't tell me
All the pain that she was keeping in
Now she's lying on the bed
I touched her face and I said:


Chorus (add stadium Rock guitars and drums)
When you cry, when you're scared
When you feel like life just ain't fair
When you cry, I do too
But I'll always be right here for you
When it all becomes too much
I'll love you with my whole life, oh, oh
When you cry


(Piano, strings, stadium Rock guitars and drums)
Verse 2:
She looks at me with watery eyes
And tells me everything about herself
My soul feels just as dark as hers does
'Cause I know that she's going through hell
I said, "I hate to see you looking so hurt
So never forget these words
No, never forget these words..."


Chorus:
(Bombastic guitar solo)


Bridge:
No matter what she's going through
I'll always be by her side


Chorus:

Outro:
Tears falling, heart breaking by the second
Oh God, tell me how'd it come to...this
(music fades)

Comments

  • KatiesPRIDE
    KatiesPRIDE Hertfordshire

    Lovely, paints a story really well. X

  • sidshovel
    sidshovel merseyside

    Wow!!

    Real Black Hole stuff.

    Grabs you and drags you in, Dark

    Very well written

    Sid

  • Very good. Lovely rhythm to it, good structure, very easy to imagine this set to music.

    Buckets of emotion. Great write.

  • Indeed, this is great. Just looking forward to that album!😀

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