Love Coming Down
Note, had to start a new account here since I couldn't figure out how to get on old one.
Written, recorded today, hot off the presses...
https://audiomack.com/jgkojak/song/love-coming-down
LOVE COMING DOWN
ooo I've got a feeling
Thats coming over me
And oooh this feeling
Just wont let me be
I said
Ohhhh love coming down
oohhh love coming down
Oh I need it
Every single day
When she smiles at me
I just can't look away
I said
Ohhhh Love coming down
Don't understand the feeling I'm feeling
And all I know is my sense are reeling
My head is spinning just like a wheel and
Round and round til I'm falling I feel like
Love coming down
Down I'm falling
I can hear love calling
I cant escape I'm all in
Love coming down
Comments
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Good to see you here. We've all had to register again, but it's certainly worth it. The site's even better this time around. This is my favourite song of yours so far. It still sounds a bit mechanical if you don't mind me saying, but this has some soul and I like it. I can tell where you're headed and it's getting better all the time (pardon the Beatles reference!). Keep em comin' 😀
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I like your chorus, I think that's working well.
Your opening , and later on also, seems to hang on one chord over multiple lines. For me that felt artificially constrained.
But overall it has a good feel to it.
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It sounds great!!! Glad to see you here!!
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Love the melody, and the happy lyrics.
The vibe of this song is so full of love and hope.
Thanks for sharing this lovely song with us.
Happy New Year!
Rene
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Howdy, Stranger!