OH BABY I LOVE YOU (Uke)
Here is one of my songs. Rough demo: my voice + ukulele.
https://soundcloud.com/guyetrep/oh-baby-i-love-you-uke
OH BABY I LOVE YOU
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Words and Music: © Guy E. Trépanier, 2006-2015.
All rights reserved by Guy E. Trépanier.
Intro: 8 bars (Key of D)
This is another sleepless night
Where I can't get you off my mind.
I'm dreaming of that pure delight
When I'll get home and you'll be mine.
Oh Baby, I lo-ove you,
Baby, I love you-ooo.
Oh Baby, I lo-ove you,
Baby, I love you.
Although you may be far away,
I'm still feeling you're close to me.
I hear those little words you say.
They show me how you care for me.
Oh Baby, I lo-ove you,
Baby, I love you-ooo.
Oh Baby, I lo-ove you,
Baby, I love you.
When two people love each other like we do,
They just can't be turned away from each o-other.
Oh Baby, I lo-ove you,
Baby, I love you-ooo.
Oh Baby, I lo-ove you,
Baby, I love you.
Baby, I love you.
Baby, I love you.
Baby, I love you.
Baby, I love you.
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Guy E. Trepanier #273
Melody: aug 2006 - nov 2015. Lyrics: aug 2006 - nov 2015.
Comments
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Nice!
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I like it. I think the verses are stronger than the chorus at the moment.
For the chorus I'd like to see some variation on the "I love you". Maybe you could ask "Do you love me too?" or something like that to keep it close, but not the same as the prev lines.
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You have some cool talent with your ukulele, Guy. You've crafted a nice song, and shared a good demo recording of it. I enjoyed listening! I like the song as you've written and recorded it, but as Owen suggested, it could probably become even better with a little variation introduced into the chorus. No major changes, but maybe something along the lines of what Owen proposed. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to hearing more material from you soon. 😀
Cheers,
Joseph
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What a lovely song Guy. It's great to hear a love song delivered this way. Nice to hear a uke, and your voice is great. Excellent.😀
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