Can't Stay In One Place
hi guys, I've released a new song today.
It's called "Can't Stay In One Place".
Enjoy listening and I'm opened for feedback, Haim.
https://listen.haimshim.com/cantstayinoneplace
lyrics (from my website haimshim.com):
Oh oh oh…
She knows how to dance
She knows how to dress
I pass all her tests
She knows what to wear
I like the color of her hair
I wanna touch her everywhere
She’s everything in one girl
She’s like diamonds and pearls
She’s my love in this place
I like the grace on her face
But I can’t stay in one place
I’m always changing my ways
It’s getting harder each day
But I’m still going that way
And she might be a good thing
But the last time I gave a ring
It ended up in the trash
And I don’t want my life to crash again
She knows how to paint
And she looks like a saint
I wait and I wait
She’s adding light to my life
And if I wanted a wife
She’ll probably win
I’m gonna make her my queen
But I can’t stay in one place
I’m always changing my ways
It’s getting harder each day
But I’m still going that way
And she might be a good thing
But the last time I gave a ring
It ended up in the trash
And I don’t want my life to crash
I can’t stay in one place
I’m always changing my ways
It’s getting harder each day
But I’m still going that way
And she might be a good thing
But the last time I gave a ring
It ended up in the trash
And I don’t want my life to crash again
Comments
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It's a nice song Haim!
I particularly like the doubled vocals coming in on the second chorus.
I feel like it would benefit from some additional instrumentation. Maybe a bass line right from the start, with drums coming in on the first chorus. The vocal there has quite a lift that ultimately doesn't go anywhere.
But the song itself is very nice, and you always sing them beautifully.
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Nice love song, Haim.
Love the performances. Your voice delivers this very well!
And as the song unfurls, it just keeps getting better. Love the harmony! ;-)
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Another really strong vocal performance Haim. I agree with RDM, I think it would maybe benefit from more backing. Nonetheless, this is a lovely song. I always look forward to hearing your songs.😀
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