Maybe Its You

Words - this time I prompted suno to create singer/songwriter lyrics using nothing but cliche's and metaphors,

Music - Suno / Logic Pro

I then took the stems out and put them into Logic Pro to "adjust" them.

My idea was to have two guys playing with bad equipment.

The lyrics suno came up with, honestly not that bad, just as good as some that i've seen ;)

Original - https://suno.com/s/7S5rirTJ3qL6I6xq

My idea - https://audius.co/wilhem/maybe-its-you


[Verse 1]

If you don't like my dog

I got from my ex

That was in heat when you stepped in the place

And it rubbed on your leg and it's waggin' its tail

And you're allergic

But

Honey

What the hell?

Well

I had a bad day

That's how I explain it

When I play too much Taylor and you're so sick of it

And I drink too much whiskey

So I get explicit

Well

It isn't my fault

So

Babe

Let's admit it


[Pre-Chorus]

I'm just a guy in the sky

When the fish are flyin' and the pigs are high

I don't even know if it's day or night

And it wasn't like this 'til you came into my life


[Chorus]

Blame it all on her

On the rain and the smoke and the stank and the dirt

I was ridin' a wave when she washed me ashore

And she is a house that I can't afford

Blame it all on her

The whiskey

The weed

And the rum

And the work

The teeth and the tit and the tat and the turn

My bad behavior's all 'cause of her

Blame it all on her


[Verse 2]

When the sky is gray and the air is cold

And it's sleetin' on my head and I'm gettin' so soaked

And it's floodin' in my shoes and my socks are so wet

And it ruins my mood and it makes me so mad

And I couldn't say it better

So I'll put it in a letter

How I wish I could forget her

But I feel under the weather

And it's all your fault

So I'm not the one to blame

But

Baby

Say my name

Say my name


[Pre-Chorus]

I'm just a guy in the sky

When the fish are flyin' and the pigs are high

I don't even know if it's day or night

And it wasn't like this 'til you came into my life


[Chorus]

Blame it all on her

On the rain and the smoke and the stank and the dirt

I was ridin' a wave when she washed me ashore

And she is a house that I can't afford

Blame it all on her

The whiskey

The weed

And the rum

And the work

The teeth and the tit and the tat and the turn

My bad behavior's all 'cause of her

Blame it all on her.,

Comments

  • Hey Bill thats a great song , I don't like your version , But thought Suno did a good job

  • bhengen
    bhengen usa
    edited 4:19AM

    my version is supposed to be crap. :) I have the two vocals intentionally off key. that's what I hear :)

  • ElvisNash
    ElvisNash Calif
    edited 8:35AM

    Thats why I don't like it , it ruined the song , But the Suno sounds pro on a real cool song . why would you have vocals intentionally off key. ? There aint nothing worse than that . Reminds me of Bill Murray as a crooked record producer , Baby you sound great now give me 6k , she was horrible . Your voice is the thing of angels , actually dogs committed suicide for 10 blocks. Breaking news today. 300 dogs shot themselves last night when they heard this god awful sound . Eye witness was a deaf women on drugs , but she saw them fall . On other news gas is 7 bucks a gallon and people decided to quit voting for the next 200 years . Rumors say some guy named Elvis Nash set torch to 1000 gas stations and for some reason stole a snickers bar at each one

  • bhengen
    bhengen usa
    edited 8:35AM

    its called a parody Elvis. I was making fun of the singer / songwriters who think they have talent. that's what I hear. pitchy offkey singing and playing :) I can think of at least one in particular

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