(My Love Is) Running Backwards
SUNO: https://suno.com/song/b36e38f7-85ed-466b-89fc-0c436980e2cd
ORIGINAL: https://jumpshare.com/share/rboTAepDG9vOXAv6xkBL
(MY LOVE IS) RUNNING BACKWARDS
[Verse 1]
Yeah my love is running backwards
And I feel just like a child
Sometimes I cry just like a baby
On the backstreets running wild
Yeah my love is running backwards
And there ain't no way out
I can't even get a witness
She make me wanna scream and shout
I said
[Chorus]
Don't wanna to come around here
Unless you start playing with my heart
Don't wanna to come around here
I said
We're better off apart
Better off apart
[Verse 2]
Yeah my love is running backwards
My baby, she's just like a bomb
You wait for it to detonate and
It sounds just like the song
I said
[Chorus]
Don't wanna to come around here
Unless you start playing with my heart
Don't wanna to come around here
Unless she
Finish what she started
Finish what she
[Verse 3]
Baby
She's the only one I need
But at times I feel her desire
Like a needle in me
She's my baby
Yeah she's the only one
Sometimes
I think I'm in darkness
I'm standing in the midday sun
I laugh
[Instrumental]
[Chorus]
Don't want you to come around here
Unless you start playing with my heart
Don't want you to come around here
No baby
Finish what you started
Finish what you started
Oh baby
[Outro]
Love is running
Right back to you
Back to you
That's where I run every day
And if it's not you
Oh oh oh yeah
Running back to you
That's where I come
Come and run, come and run yeah
I'm gonna run back to you baby
Comments
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What song? you never mention a song. - It sounds just like the song. Ok, I'll pick a song - I want to be your dog, by Iggy Pop and the stooges, that's a fun song :)
did you mean "I don't want you to come around here" - Don't wanna to come around here
Then who? you dropped that, then walked away - That's where I run every day / And if it's not you
I don't think this is what you meant - Unless you start playing with my heart - playing with one's heart is a bad thing, it means they are toying with you and want to hurt you. do you want to be hurt?
I'm not sure I want to go here - Finish what she started / Finish what she - 😂. that's unfortunate, but then it ties into the previous line where you want to be hurt, so... interesting. there's a hook, right there :)
This is a really strong line - I think I'm in darkness / I'm standing in the midday sun. In darkness, in midday sun sounds like a couple song titles :) hmm.....
These lyrics read like a mashup of Tom Petty songs rolled into one, and borrowing the title to one of Van Halen's song - finish what you started, replacing you with she, which is creative in itself :)
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Good groove. Found my toes tapping straight away.
I like your "my love is running backwards" phrase. It's ambiguous enough to be intriguing at the start - what does that mean? Yet it resolves clearly enough and early enough that it doesn't distract from the lyric and meaning of the song. That's a good trick!
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