Knockin'
One reason I love SUNO, is I can find an old one-off one take Demo and turn it into something...
SUNO: https://suno.com/song/13bb142a-611b-4338-8edf-e7f22beafb66
DEMO: https://jumpshare.com/share/cE7BGFzJcjvZs3A1FyGg
KNOCKIN'
[Verse 1]
Every day you're knockin' at my door
Sometimes I think I've seen you before
Another lifetime maybe, I'm not the same
You been tryin' to find me, baby, what is your name?
[Chorus]
Knocking on my door
Knocking on my door
Knocking on my door
Knocking on my door
[Verse 2]
So every now and again you come by
I say I don't know you anymore but still you try
You come by and give my doorbell a ring
But did you give the other kind to me when we were a thing
No no, still
[Chorus]
Knocking on my door
Knocking on my door, baby
Knocking on my door
Knocking on my door
[Bridge]
You think one of these days I'm gonna take you back
You think by now that you'd get the nack
You still don't know how or why baby what love is for
So why are you still knockin' on my door
[Spoken]
Oh, babe
You know
Every day you're knocking at my door
(ring ring)
Or calling my telephone line
(ring ring)
Forget about it baby I'm doing fine
without you
Everyday knockin' on my door (knock knock)
Givin' my telephone a ring (ring ring)
I don't want the flowers you bring
I'm not gonna answer even if you sing
knockin' on my door
knockin' on my door
Knockin' on my door
Comments
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You could use 2 adjectives to open each verse . Trouble , Anxiety . Then we get its this person by spoken section
Sure its a great demo service , then you could use what Suno produce's and record it with session players and sing it yourself .
They chart it out using the Nashville number system, lay it down pretty quickly
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you misspelled nack it's knack.
this is a funny song. sounds to me more like a cheech and chong skit :).. Chong in drag ringing the doorbell while cheech standing on a footstool looks through the peephole trying not to make a sound :) :).
And you missed a brilliant hook, - baby, what is your name?, you could have centered around that theme., like Warren Zevon' A certain Girl - what's her name, I can't tell you.
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SUNO didn't like "knack" but said "nack" correctly
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I was able to get it to work with Suno, besides, that's not the correct usage of the word Knack means when the gift for something. Hint is what you were looking for.
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