Father & Son (Remix)
This is one that I originally did. cleaned up the lyrics a bet and set it to a different genre.
Words - Me; Music: Suno
https://suno.com/s/t8NWKejxEE5RvjSi
[Intro - Solo Viola | Dark and Mournful]
[Verse 1 - Son | Somber]
My father, dear father,
At your grave I kneel
Head in hands, I weep
In solemn self-reflection
Trying to make sense
Of your disdain, your anger
[Verse 2 - Father]
Son, With closed mind, you refused
To see the meaning behind my intent
The words were never to destroy you,
But to build you as a man from a boy
[Verse 3 - Son]
My father, with open mind, I found,
Your chosen words did not convey,
As anything other than degrading
A demon, spewing hate and anger
Constant tirades left me shattered
[Build up]
[Chorus - High Energy Duet | Echo Effect]
Powerful are words, (inflict hate),
Powerful are words, (bestow love),
Powerful are words, (crush spirits),
Powerful are words, (rise above).
[Instrumental Bridge: Grand Orchestral Swell]
[Verse 4 - Spoken | Son]
I walk away, never to return, (words never said)
And despite it all, I'm still your son, (after all).
Even in its finality, I'm still your son, (after all).
Blood is blood, that will never change, (after all).
[Outro - Layered Vocals]
Powerful were your words, (said without regret)
Powerful were your words, (said without remorse)
Powerful were your words, (that I let)
Powerful were your words, (affect my soul)
[Big Finish, Orchestral Crash, Fade to Silence]
Comments
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Can never see that title without thinking of Cat Stevens / Yusuf - even though they are completely independent songs.
Love that intricate violin! I like the combo of heavy rock and orchestral instruments.
Those verses feel so intimate, I'm wondering if the music there should reflect that before hitting that high energy chorus? I can see there's already a nod in that direction, but maybe take it even further?
Nonetheless, really enjoyed that.
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Thanks Owen, I think this style isn't what Suno is geared for. this took me 50 tries to get to not sing the same voice for all. Suno really isn't designed for this intricate of style. The other song that's below this one Canon in D Major, also took about 50 tries. to get it sound something that I had in my head. Sid suggested I do a concept album like Tommy, but I'm not going to attempt that in suno, not worth the aggravation.. :)
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Fair enough! 50 tries requires real perseverance and dedication.
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Or complete stubbornness as my sister would have said :)
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So dramatic!!! splendid Suno here!!! Wonderful and sad lyrics, really moving, tears walk my eyes while listening!!!!!! Madre mía!!!
Suno has a specia taste for Spanish colors!!! Normal!! hahaha
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Thank you so much Mora,! I’m really glad the emotion came through for you. Your comment made my day :)
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