Foresaken (Remix)
[Intro - distorted 303 bass pulse and harsh electronic layers]
re-did this song
https://suno.com/s/eE6SCr62GDkWoJZa
[Verse 1 - Energetic | 120 bpm]
My God, why this pain?
What hast thy done?
From mournful eyes
A sorrow river runs
Thru trembling fingers,
Down ashen cheeks,
Into anguished pools,
Of reflections past,
[Pre-Chorus - Angelic Choir Vocals]
Yet, I know not why,
Thou hast forsaken me.
[Chorus - Layered Vocals | Echo Effect]
If it be thy will,
I'll trust in thee
Forever in mercy
Set my soul free
Set my soul free
Set my soul free
[Verse 2 - High Energy Duet]
My God, hear my cries
Where hast thy gone
Amongst the sands
Are footprints of one
Pleads to the skies
In deafness falls
Words now barren
Unseen in the abyss
Thou art not my God
If thou art my God,
Then forsaken me not
[Pre-Chorus - Angelic Choir Vocals]
Yet, I know not why,
Thou hast forsaken me.
[Chorus - Layered Vocals | Echo Effect]
But if it be thy will,
I'll trust in thee
Forever at your mercy
To set my soul free
Set my soul free
Set my soul free
Set my soul free
[Build up]
[Verse 3 - 80 bpm]
My god, I am resolute
I lay blame where not
My head bowed in shame
This pain I feel
My cross to bear,
I am beaten and tired,
So very, very tired
Sand of time grow thin
And as my light dims
The cold grows warm
[Outro - Gentle Fade Out | Spoken]
In your hands I'm taken
Thou hast not forsaken me
And released me of my misery
Comments
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Good that the vocals are clear in this one - the lyrics are important.
Love these lines - they really bite:
From mournful eyes
A sorrow river runs
Powerful chorus! And some really dramatic dynamics across the song.
The angelic female voice is another strong contrast with the gritty male vocal. With the vocal chorus for yet another layer. Then spoken word.
I think this is excellent.
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Thanks Owen :)
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