Thoroughly Modern Man
For once I am pretty happy with SUNO's output from my original demo
https://suno.com/song/8e396ab9-8f7b-47c8-8189-535baf6deecf
THOROUGHLY MODERN MAN
[Verse 1]
I've been missing since Tuesday
I've got the blues but I'm okay
No one much is looking for me
It's like I'm invisible
[Verse 2]
I'll ride on 'til Monday
Where I can walk in the sun and stay
Hidden from view and interconnected to the world that I once knew
[Chorus]
When your life's new direction
Feels like a scene from The French Connection
And the only way out is to rise up alone
And quietly take a stand
When you feel you are a number
Take your data and rise from your slumber
Become one with the coming wave, become a thoroughly modern man
[Verse 3]
You can run, run, run
But there's nowhere to hide
You can run, run, run
But you can't run from what's in your mind
[Verse 4]
I'll keep running 'til one day
Catch up to myself and say
I don't understand just who you are
Or what you have become
[Chorus]
When your life's new direction
Feels like a scene from The French Connection
And the only way out is to rise up alone
And quietly take a stand
When you feel you are a number
Then take your data and rise from your slumber
Become one with the coming wave, become a thoroughly modern man
Become a thoroughly modern man
Thoroughly modern man
Original demo:
Comments
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Great lyrics and the way you're using Suno is clever. It's still your song though the performance obviously isn't. The production is spot on and, if you weren't honest about it, I'm not sure that many folks would know it's AI. I'll always have my reservations, but that's just me. I'm old fashioned. I totally get why you're doing it this way and the results are excellent.😀
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Sounds good , nope can't tell its Suno , thats how good they got
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That chorus works particularly well. Good sound!
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