Jabberwocky (Remixed)
Words, Me; Music Suno (sorry Chris :) )
Took the original song and tried a different style.
Original - https://suno.com/s/WjoO2nla8w9tgBf6
Remix - https://suno.com/s/8lnJ23GKvhGDZGvV
[Verse 1 - Female Vocals]
Suspended in the glow of sunsets
Where orange lemon yellows melt
And purply hues casting shadows
Sparklin diamonds in Orion's belt
[Verse 2 - Female Vocals]
I must fight the Jabberwocks,
The Jubjubs, Bandersnatches
My inner demons, turmoils
Freeing me from locks, latches
[Chorus - Echo Effect | Layered Vocals | Male Vocals]
Spinnin wheels, ball bouncin round
Only in shadows are troubles found
Spinnin Wheels and spinnin time
Can't Let vines of indecision climb
[Build Up]
[Saxophone Solo]
[Verse 3 - Female Vocals]
Twirling blacks and ivory shades
Sharp silvery blade cuttin minds
Twisting branches of tumtum trees
Decisions fleeting with the breeze
[Bridge - High Energy | Duet]
I take the potion that makes me tall
making my problems seem very small
The jabberwocky slain, nevermore
My demons are past, I close the door
[Chorus - Echo Effect | Layered Vocals | Male Vocals]
Spinnin wheels, ball bouncin round
Only in shadows are troubles found
Spinnin Wheels and spinnin time
Can't Let vines of indecision climb
[Outro - Gentle fade out | Female Vocals]
The ophislither doth herald a new dawn
Skinneslashing my soul of the demsprite
Freed from the branches of the tumtum
In Carroll's words where I gain insight
Comments
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Bill, interesting remix, but I prefer the original version myself.
Good Luck
Tex
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Thanks tex :)
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No need to apologize Bill! 😁 I'm old fashioned that's all. I should be the one apologizing!
So said, I get what you guys are doing and this one is interesting. You've created two completely different songs here. I prefer the first arrangement - probably because it sounds more traditional, but the second take is more contemporary.
Both a good listen.😀
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Thanks Chris. the first i was going for Donovan, Then I was playing with sounds, and thought the second would fit.
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Sí, yo también prefer the original but here there is something special... the caos has another feeling, darkness and ivory shadows, a wonderful contrast, and the general motion that wraps the story...
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Thanks Mora, I like them both for different reasons, and it's my mood which determines which I'll listen to :)
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Sounds like an Artist , but forgot her name , Yup good production . Maybe she's signed to Warner Bros
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I was trying to make it sound like Carly Rae Jepsen, since you can't use name, I grabbed the essence of her voice
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Depends if they're signed to Warner Bros you can . I'm not sure how many artists are in their stable , I would think a lot . Then they get paid , what ever that % is , no idea . Norah Jones , thats who it is. Blue Note Records . looks like a indy label . not sure
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Yes, they both work. Individual preference I guess. Mine is the original too! :)
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Thanks Owen.
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The original is fine but the remix really brings life to the song and emphasized the imagination and wordplay - which is fantastic
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Thanks :)
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