Yesterday,Today, and Tomorrow Lyrics

Kayla813
Kayla813 United States
Get back to the basics
They don't have to make you sick
You're worth
You're birth
Was the key
To your destiny

Yeah yeah, I said I'm sorry today
Sorry for the way it ended
I was done pretending

But now we're friends
Friends that bend
I am so happy that you are back in My life again

You taught me pride,
You both taught me truth,
I love that you love me,
It's a great feeling too

But let's stay friends
Yeah, let's have the best Christmas
Never again to be past tense

I try to make you see my point of view
I know you are angry about the way people treat me
I understand it is very screw
Let's see let's see. . . .

Comments

  • All your songs have internal meaning that doesn't necessarily translate to the listener. I'm not sure what you mean by "I understand it is very screw", you have in your head what you mean, but it really doesn't fit. Other than that, it's good that you have a vehicle to release your inner angst :)

  • I get a rap vibe from this. Based on the rhyming and the short sharp phrasing. And I know that may be completely off base from what you had in mind! How somethings looks written, and how it sounds can be miles apart.

    If it's delivered fast (whether rap or not), it may turn out to be quite a short song, so that could be something to consider. But in the end it needs to say what you want it to say regardless of length. There are short songs out there.

    And, as with all your songs, there is a sense of intimacy and vulnerability to it.

  • its to short , you need a Suno account and practice what you can add to this at 2 :50

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