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SebMood

Hi everyone!

I'm not a native English speaker, unfortunately.

I already posted about my uncertainties in the forum a while back and thankfully received encouragement to keep going...

I'd love to show you a song that hasn't been mastered or released yet and would really appreciate your feedback! I'm curious to hear your opinions!

Have a great Sunday and best regards!

StoneFlowers

That's what we're all looking for here...yes please bring on your song

bhengen

There was a link to his song on dropbox, but t's gone

MoraAmaroLaLoba

Your song????

RainyDayMan

Please do! Post the lyrics here along with a link to a recording (if you have one) and I'm sure you'll receive some feedback as well as encouragement.

SebMood

Hi everyone!

Sorry, I completely forgot to see how many of you had written here... I'm even more pleased to hear from you and am looking forward to your feedback! :)

The drums, especially the kick and snare, are still a bit too hard, that will be fixed...

https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/upxut7sxgstu09wnhrej2/U-gotta-have-phun_Four.wav?rlkey=gtdiam18q2503bvyzb06s4kie&st=7xyp7t4h&dl=0

Thanks so much and best regards from Germany,

Seb

StoneFlowers

yeah fun... yeah

SebMood

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/16873#Comment_16873

I'm glad you like it!

Thank you!☺️

RainyDayMan

Love the funky vibe! Keys are very nice. Agree about the drums, but an easy fix.

Feels like a good match to the lyric too.

Would you mind including the lyrics here on TSF when posting your songs? Makes it much easier to comment on those.

Good stuff!

SebMood

Thank you so much! @RainyDayMan

You're not bothered by the English, are you? I'm still a bit unsure about that...

I'll post the lyrics later.

Thank you! :)

RainyDayMan

I think any issues with the English might be something we can help you with, if you'd like that kind of help. As a non-native speaker, you seem very fluent already!

ChrisPrice

Yeah, no problem with the language in my opinion. This is a really cool track. A great arrangement. I could listen to an album of this stuff. No crits from me..I really like it.

SebMood

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/16892#Comment_16892

Thank you very much for the offer!

I'll definitely come back to you if I'm unsure about any lyrics.

Thank you for your feedback, it definitely gives me strength!

Wishing you all a relaxing Christmas season!