It Felt So Right (bit more like what I had in mind)
I know I run this before but with Suno I've found that tweaking the lyrics and adding lines or taking them away is easy. This is more the sound I had in mind. I wrote this for a girl that passed away less than a year ago, wish I had wrote this before her passing, wish she could have heard this.
https://soundclick.com/song/15136901
It Felt So Right
Girl, the moment you walked in, I was mesmerized
Our eyes locked tight, like fate had them magnetized
Chemistry hit us hard, like a double shot of moonshine
I said, "You look like an angel to me, can you fly?"
Giggling your reply, "Like fireworks on the forth of July."
Then your kiss ignited our hearts ablaze, so divine
We were,
Two lonely hearts that met in the night
Two lonely souls needing to be held tight
Two bodies tangled in a fiery romance
Crying out for a fighting chance
Baby, we knew it was oh so wrong
But at that moment
It felt so right
Yeah baby, it felt so right
Two lovers lost in a once-in-a-lifetime dance
Sway too and froe, locked in a hypnotic trance
Our attraction struck hard, like a lightning strike
Two glistening bodies sparkling in the moonlight
But it'd be pointless stoking that flaring flame
Or trying to make this into a lovers game
We were,
Two lonely hearts that met in the night
Two lonely souls needing to be held tight
Two bodies tangled in a fiery romance
Crying out for a fighting chance
Baby, we knew it was oh so wrong
But at that moment
It felt so right
Yeah baby, it felt so right
(Instrumental)
I'll remember my whole life through
How you needed me as much as I needed you
The passion we shared wasn't something planned
You hadn't tried to hide that wedding band
We were,
Two lonely hearts that met in the night
Two lonely souls needing to be held tight
Two bodies tangled in a fiery romance
Crying out for a fighting chance
Baby, we knew it was oh so wrong
But at that moment
It felt so right
Yeah baby, it felt so right
Our desire raged like a wild fire
Devouring all feelings of guilt and shame
So baby, neither one of us is to blame
Coz, at that moment
It felt so right
Yeah baby, it felt so right
Baby, it felt so right
Comments
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You captured the moment perfectly. beautiful melody.
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Classic country!
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Bill and Owen, Thanks for the listen and reply. I was hoping to put a little feeling into it.
My best to both of you guys
Tex
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