A Rattlesnake in Painful Hibernation
https://suno.com/song/8e7bb259-1cfc-44c0-a741-1f80285e73bf
Words by recovering Elvis
Verse 1
Woke up in a fever, cold sweat and dust in my veins,
Whiskey on the table, ghosts hummin’ my name.
Bullet hole memories, stitched with sin and pride,
Every saint I ever met took the devil’s side.
Pre-Chorus
Ain’t no mercy in the mirror, just a scar I feed,
Dreams crawl slow where the daylight bleeds.
Chorus
I’m a rattlesnake in painful hibernation,
Coiled in the dark of my own creation.
Heart still hissin’, half alive, half gone —
Hell keeps hummin’ my favorite song.
Post-Chorus (short & snappy)
Let it burn. Let it bite.
I ain’t done tonight.
Verse 2
Blood on my boots from the roads I’ve crossed,
I pay in pain for every coin I lost.
Love tried to save me but it burned too quick,
Now I sleep with the sins that made me sick.
Pre-Chorus
Cold steel prayers in the chamber’s spin,
You don’t cheat hell, you just walk back in.
Chorus
I’m a rattlesnake in painful hibernation,
Coiled in the dark of my own creation.
Heart still hissin’, half alive, half gone —
Hell keeps hummin’ my favorite song.
Post-Chorus
Let it burn. Let it bite.
I ain’t done tonight.
Bridge
Every outlaw’s dream is a barroom grave,
Where the jukebox moans for the soul it gave.
But I still twitch when the thunder calls,
‘Cause even dead snakes dance in the fall.
Final Chorus
I’m a rattlesnake in painful hibernation,
Waitin’ on the heat for my resurrection.
Heart still hissin’, half alive, half gone —
Hell keeps hummin’ my favorite song.
Final Post-Chorus (fade)
Let it burn. Let it bite.
I ain’t done tonight.
Comments
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you have some catchy hooks - Let it burn. Let it bite /I ain’t done tonight. all of what you have been producing could be soundtracks to in a movie :)
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Probably could, if I sang em with human players . All comes down to great connections, like any biz .And what does every biz have in common ? A tradeoff of money.
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