Shooting Star Lyrics

Kayla813

This happened last night on my walk, I told myself today I would write a song about it today cos it is true, honest, and kind_

It's been a quiet numb week
Thoughts of you & me
What do you see?
What do you see?

I still see divine
I see this shooting star
Blink in time
Of all my other angels I had
The only thing that made me gasp

Was those other four are gone
They moved to heaven so I thought oh my God
I got one of you
You're still here
How do you lie & grin from ear to ear?

What do you want me to do?
I see you still let everyone tell you
how to lace up you're shoes

I'm not mad, just concerned
I still listen and think it's absurd

But who am I to judge?
It's no1s fault I fell in love
With you so much

I'm not mad, just concerned
I still listen and think it's absurd

We promised not to lie
Why are people rooting for our love to die?
This ain't right, but sigh

I'll watch *our* honest not forced kind love, with the shooting star God sent me last night from above

Domd

Internal stuff is hard to get across. I like this part a lot...
I still see divine
I see this shooting star
Blink in time
Of all my other angels I had
The only thing that made me gasp

That should be your chorus and you should build around that maybe changing the last line to something more chorusy.

Just my opinion. I think it's worth working on!

RainyDayMan

Nice to see you posting something Kayla. I think every one of your songs comes from the heart.

MoraAmaroLaLoba

HHi Kaya, there are wonderful lines here, a heart filled in love and fear and acceptance.