Tired Ole Bones
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TIRED OLE BONES
[Chorus]
Tired bones
Tired ole bones
Won’t you quit breakin’ my stones
Tired bones
Tired ole bones
Won’t you just leave me alone
V1
But if it all crumbles
Crumples apart
If it all crumbles to the ground
Yeh, if it all crumbles
Crumbles apart
Pieces of my heart will come around
Pieces of my heart
Still got my heart
[Chorus]
Tired bones
Tired ole bones
Won’t you quit breakin’ my stones
Tired bones
Tired ole bones
Won’t you just leave me alone
V2
‘Cuz I just wanna dance
I just wanna play
Just wanna be sixteen again
Yeh, I just wanna dance
I just wanna play
I’m missin’ you fierce my friend
Reachin’ for yesterday
Sweet yesterday, yeh-ee-yeah
[Chorus]
Tired bones
Tired ole bones
Won’t you quit breakin’ my stones
Tired bones
Tired ole bones
Won’t you just leave me alone
[Music]
[Bridge]
Never lose
Never lose heart
Don’t you ever lose heart
Never lose heart
V3
‘Cuz I’m ‘a moanin’
Moanin’ at the moon
May I one day be a celestial star
Yeh, I’m ‘a moanin’
Groanin’ at the moon
Why did God let me come this far?
[Chorus]
Tired bones
Tired ole bones
Won’t you quit breakin’ my stones
Tired bones
Tired ole bones
Won’t you just leave me alone..
Tired bones
Tired ole bones
Tired bones
Tired ole bones
Tired bones
Tired ole bones..
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Comments
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And isn't it nice to be a published songwriter? Thought occurs, as soon as you post the song anywhere, you're published. How cool is that?
It's a very positive thought, though not the usual meaning of the term. But it is lovely to think there are people listening to your music and enjoying it!
Lot of us going to agree with this one! It's a fun song musically, but with a sad undertone lyrically. I like the mixture.
Enjoyed it.
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@RainyDayMan Oh, Gee! I hope it didn't come off like I was a "published" songwriter, Lol! Yeah, it's nice to know someone's finally listening! 😍
Renee
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has a nice cadence to it. :)
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@bhengen thank you! 😍 I just could be a songwriter, yet! Lol!
Renee
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Another catchy tune. Yes, tired bones and mentally exhausted brain. :-). Great listening and feel-good song.
My favorite verse:
"‘Cuz I just wanna dance
I just wanna play
Just wanna be sixteen again
Yeh, I just wanna dance
I just wanna play
I’m missin’ you fierce my friend
Reachin’ for yesterday
Sweet yesterday, yeh-ee-yeah"
I appreciate your sharing. It takes guts to share and be critiqued.
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@TammyB Thank you so much for your kind and inspiring words. Can't wait to hear your next song!
Renee 💌
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