Snart
Words - me; Music Suno
read an article about Transhumanism.
https://suno.com/song/063c7622-a8cc-4594-a105-bef378110c04?sh=ByYqhJw6CoQFIabX
To be honest, I did not know about dante's trasumanar , it came up in an article that i was reading, and I thought that sounded cool, so I worked around it :)
Depends on the feedback, I might bury it more in abstraction before I enter this in another song competition.
[Intro]
Snart is an entity not truly free
A physiology not set in reality
Genetically anatomically chemically
Biologically logically, generality
[Verse 1]
Snart starts the morning the same
Swimming in mirrors reflecting shame
Today the task, pick the mask, desired
To inspire, conspire, admired satire
[Verse 2]
At night Snart dreams of blissful neutrality
Unbound by religious, societal conformality
To be free of ideology lost to carbon dating
Staining the shroud of turin turns gratifying
[Chorus]
Dante's trasumanar visions of post humanisms
Transforms snart's desired altered genetisism
Pre to post, Snart's foremost transformation
Biochemical mechanical conscious transmutation
[Verse 3]
Snart's obscene dance with machines is seen
As irrational preening and utterly demeaning
An aborition aberration, disgusting display
A tortured lost frock of the flock gone astray
[Verse 4]
Chemicals swirling in a beaker behind laughter
Smashing articles of particles long sought after
Unravels strands of DNA, for today is the day
Snart gorges, forages on a new glorious buffet
[Chorus]
Dante's trasumanar visions of post humanisms
Transforms Snart's desired altered genetisism
Pre to post, Snart's foremost transformation
Biochemical mechanical conscious transmutation
[Outro]
Snart stands tall amongst them all, who call
What has become, to some, humanities downfall
Carefully wading through, ignorance berating
Revolutionary evolution transcension awaiting
Comments
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Way over this country boys mind
Rap sounds good man0 -
@ElvisNash - thanks.. not as nonsensical as I wanted, but my mind not really been in the creative mood lately. like walking through snow
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@bhengen -You definitely have the rap genre down and I like how it's unique mixed with your other genre.
Yes, enter this in the contest. This is bad assets (no cursing), even though I don't know the meaning of the song. :-)
This is the one!
Great work and I can't wait to hear what's next.
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Over my head too Bill, but good luck, try prompting "Linked in Park or Lincoln Park" might con the censors!
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@sidshovel - could work, but may not get the same result.. Although I was able to use the rapper logic instead of eminem, don't think it worked as it sounded nothing like logic.
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anybody get how clever i was - snart is trans spelled backards😀😂
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transgender ? Nope never crossed my mind
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I'm still struggling with Minions, your snart hasn't got a chance!
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transhumanism. - cross between machine and humans :)
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The song is confusing enough , I'd just say trans
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Strong rhymes! Otherwise, beyond me.
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thanks for the comment. :)
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Now that know I snarts a robot . I get your song
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