Blue Blue Jeans
DullRoar
Saskatchewan, Canada
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Sounds good man
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Nice! And welcome to the forum.
I like how you're using blue jeans as the signal for her change here. It's a specific detail that grounds it.
There's a wistful, sweet sadness to it. And the love for her shines through without being stated.
Not sure about the break after the bridge with the spanish sort of feel to it. For me, it didn't connect with the rest of the music, but that's your decision.
BTW it's helpful if you can post the lyrics here on TSF along with the link to the music. Then we can follow along as we're listening and (hopefully!) give you better feedback,
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Kinda reminds me of Jim Reeves
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Howdy, Stranger!