WHEN YOU FALL IN LOVE (Uke)
Here is one of my songs.
Rough recording: My voice + ukulele
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WHEN YOU FALL IN LOVE
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© Words and music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2007 - 2024.
All rights reserved by Guy E. Trépanier.
Intro: 4 bars (key of D)
When you fall in love, you may have good feelings
for simple things like soft lightings.
But when you're in love, doesn't mean it is shared,
so be aware and play it fair.
When you fall in love, you never know
how long will it last, give you full blast.
When you fall in love, you never know
how fair will it be, so stay mind free.
When you fall in love, you may find in a smile
something fertile that looks worthwhile.
But when you're in love, doesn't mean it is strong,
so move along if things go wrong.
When you fall in love, you never know
how long will it last, give you full blast.
When you fall in love, you never know
how fair will it be, so stay mind free.
When a boy goes for a girl, he may just want a recess.
When a girl attracts a boy, she may just need tenderness.
When you fall in love, you never know
how long will it last, give you full blast.
When you fall in love, you never know
how fair will it be, so stay mind free.
When you fall in love, keep your mind free.
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Guy E. Trépanier #642
Melody and lyrics: 2007-2024.
Comments
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The song gave me the Ritchie Valens (La Bamba) feel for some reason. "Oh Donna"
I love the tune with the ukulele/voice; It's nice that you can play and sing a tune!
Although, I feel a lot of the lyrics appeared forced and not natural and didn't make much sense to me. I could be wrong, because you are the songwriter, and you know what each word is supposed to relay.
I would maybe put a little bit more substance in the lyrics and remove some of the chorus.
I'm new at songwriting so please take my opinion with a grain of salt.
Overall, I love the catchy feel and creativeness of your work. Keep it going!
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I found the music very soothing, light, positive. The lyric is a bit different though, there's an undercurrent of darkness, things going to fail. I'm not sure if that contrast was deliberate to create tension, or just turned out that way!
Not sure all the phrases are working nicely - soft lightings, for example felt a bit odd to me, but overall it hangs together well.
Always enjoy hearing another song from you!
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Sweet tune , but your forcing rhymes Guy
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