Perfectly Necromancer

Words me, music Suno

used bob dylan's perfectly 4th streets as a base, tried to capture the snarkiness of his lyrics.

thanks to owen for the list of words. that helped..

and sid for sowing the seeds of doubt, worked better than my sowing the seeds of nerves :)


https://suno.com/song/e5f9961e-50df-4c3e-84da-f2186b6fb9cb?sh=ydEpJlNl162UJXRl


[Verse 1]

How dare you question

My ability to cast the spell of the dead

And where were you, besides, 

When I was learning, abandoning me instead


[Verse 2]

Turning your blind eyes

Then, to sadly criticize my energy's flow

forsaking the revenancy

To perform in your pathetic one man show


[Verse 3]

Sowing the seeds of doubt

Behind my back, as the laughing bones dance

Despite that, I've become

The most perfectly necromancer


[Verse 4]

I hold this skull grinning

To your face, it mocks and belittles you

And perform the dark rites

To summons ancient bats out of belfries flew


[Verse 5]

Returning them to the earth

So that they can be amongst the newly departed

I slaughter the sacrificial lamb

Resurrecting them to devour your soulless heart


[Verse 6]

I am an apprentice no more

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust into the flames

I cast your scowling soul

Back into earth's soil from whence you came

Comments

  • sidshovel
    sidshovel merseyside

    Well done, overcome the block and hammered it.

    You managed the snarkiness to a T. Chastised and banished, great depiction.

    Followed the whole piece and enjoyed it too.

    Excellent song Bill.

  • Wonderful! It's amazing how fast the block can disappear once something clicks - and how painful it is until it does!

  • @sidshovel - thanks for the comment. thanks for the help. :)

  • @RainyDayMan - Thanks owen, it was actually your list where i got the inspiration from. thanks for that.

  • I would have to google what that word meant , Sounds good Bill , dark as you can get

  • @ElvisNash - thanks Elvis.

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