Perfectly Necromancer
Words me, music Suno
used bob dylan's perfectly 4th streets as a base, tried to capture the snarkiness of his lyrics.
thanks to owen for the list of words. that helped..
and sid for sowing the seeds of doubt, worked better than my sowing the seeds of nerves :)
https://suno.com/song/e5f9961e-50df-4c3e-84da-f2186b6fb9cb?sh=ydEpJlNl162UJXRl
[Verse 1]
How dare you question
My ability to cast the spell of the dead
And where were you, besides,
When I was learning, abandoning me instead
[Verse 2]
Turning your blind eyes
Then, to sadly criticize my energy's flow
forsaking the revenancy
To perform in your pathetic one man show
[Verse 3]
Sowing the seeds of doubt
Behind my back, as the laughing bones dance
Despite that, I've become
The most perfectly necromancer
[Verse 4]
I hold this skull grinning
To your face, it mocks and belittles you
And perform the dark rites
To summons ancient bats out of belfries flew
[Verse 5]
Returning them to the earth
So that they can be amongst the newly departed
I slaughter the sacrificial lamb
Resurrecting them to devour your soulless heart
[Verse 6]
I am an apprentice no more
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust into the flames
I cast your scowling soul
Back into earth's soil from whence you came
Comments
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Well done, overcome the block and hammered it.
You managed the snarkiness to a T. Chastised and banished, great depiction.
Followed the whole piece and enjoyed it too.
Excellent song Bill.
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Wonderful! It's amazing how fast the block can disappear once something clicks - and how painful it is until it does!
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@sidshovel - thanks for the comment. thanks for the help. :)
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@RainyDayMan - Thanks owen, it was actually your list where i got the inspiration from. thanks for that.
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I would have to google what that word meant , Sounds good Bill , dark as you can get
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@ElvisNash - thanks Elvis.
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