Lazarus
Lyrics - Me; Music - Sonu
https://suno.com/song/acb1ba33-7f9f-4075-a9a6-59282218fdec?sh=dfPswgOePMignOhX
Heard porcupine tree's version of Lazarus, thought I'd write my own. not as profound, but I like it.
[Verse 1]
Muted whites pale grays
Kneeling head to floor
Illness relentless toll
Tomorrow appears nevermore
[Chorus]
Lazarus
Lazarus
[Verse 2]
Heart beats time ending
Bathing in mourning dew
Awash in familial splendor
Life's clock chiming few
[Chorus]
Lazarus
Lazarus
[Verse 3]
Clear eyes theatrical screens
Sepiatic movies visions bygones
Decsions made regrets wasteful
Hopefull wishing rising dawns
[Bridge]
head bowed reverence glory
Blessed mercy of only son
Essense dormant renewed
Red rivers veins runs
[Outro]
Lazarus, new chances few
Lazarus, rebirth given glory
Lazurus, old, scattered winds
Lazarus, legends storied history
Lazarus
Lazarus
Comments
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Liked the music a lot, struggled with the lyrics trying to find references to raising the dead. Probably there, just wasted on me!
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@sidshovel - the bridge. thanks for commenting. you liked the music, sometimes prog rock is more about the music than words.
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It did give me an idea for a song more suited to your style than mine.
JC returns finds his mate's been entombed, raised from the dead, he carries on his business.
Except JC finds out his friend was killed in the first place, because he was suspected of being a serial killer.
Only after more murders surface does he realise he screwed up!
What d'ya think?
Sid
P.S. Did get the "essense dormant" as pointed out, just not clever enough!
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@sidshovel - sounds intriguing. I'll think about it..
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I've read the story on Jesus bringing him back from the dead , I'm not really getting this in your song , But it sounds great like always using AI
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These Jesus stories always confuse me . You'd think after all these miracles . The jews would have been convinced , he's the messiah
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@ElvisNash - Guess I need to re-write the bridge :) he's standing before jesus, which is the first 2 lines, then next 2 lines is him being reborn :)
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Well you need to include the story . Listeners need to be hand fed like a toddler
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@ElvisNash , @sidshovel - how about this for the bridge ;)
Head bowed reverence glory
Blessed mercy of only son
Essense dormant renewed
Hazzah, now not dead
Praise Jesus
Praise Jesus
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Well ya got Jesus in there
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@ElvisNash - tbh,don't really care for the red river veins line, but after 50 iterations, I just went with this :).. I'll think of something better later
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Well you know what ( They ) say , re-writes are king
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I think I followed this one. Illness and death, followed by reviewing one's life, standing in front of God, and being reborn.
Good choice of music - haunting, if I may use the pun. That sort of wail @ Lazarus.
Good stuff.
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@RainyDayMan - Thanks Owen,.i really appreciate it. the bridge still needs work. it's seems forced to me.
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the whole bridge needs to be better thought out..
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Love this Suno production! Great song0
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