You're The Reason

IronKnee

Happy April 1st.............just a little something for the day. Any and all comments are welcome, while first impressions are most welcome 😉

Thanks

"You're The Reason"

By Tom Tognaci

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13160437

 

You’re the reason why the kids are ugly

You’re the reason why they aren’t so bright

At best, you’d be described as sort of snuggly

And you don’t know your left hand from your right

 

Now, don’t misunderstand my grieving

As something meant to injure you

Miss opportunity just never did much interest me

Cause, I would never, ever, cheat on you…

 

Just for the record, dear, I want to make it crystal clear

While love is blind, it’s all too plain to see

That,

 

You’re the reason why the kids are ugly

You’re the reason why they aren’t so bright

At best, you’d be described as sort of snuggly

And you don’t know your left hand from your right

 

Now, come on babe, there’s no call for leaving

Leaving would break my heart in two

And as I look into your eyes, I can’t be sure to laugh or cry

Cause, I’m holding this one secret from you

 

Just for the record, dear, I want to make it crystal clear

This April fool’s day song is just for you….

 

You’re the reason why the kids are ugly

You’re the reason why they aren’t so bright

At best, you’d be described as sort of snuggly

And you don’t know your left hand from your right

RainyDayMan

I think you've done well to keep it funny and comedic here, without letting it feel mean.

The upbeat, jaunty music is a big help there. The double vocals work well.

And I like the pause before "snuggly".

As a thought, maybe your tag line could be "maybe the kids got a double dose" or something like that to, again, take any sting out of it.

Made me smile.

MoraAmaroLaLoba

The lyrics are devastating but it goes well with that touch of humor with which you have impregnated it!!! Great job @Ironknee

ChrisPrice

Ha ha..Awesome song Tom! If I sung that to my other half she would probably beat me senseless!! I jest, she'd see the funny side too, in fact I'll probably give her a listen later. Well done😀

icystorm

LOL! 😆 Hilarious lyrics! A perfect song for April 1! Nice work, Tom! 😀