In The End

CorkingCrackBand

This is very much a meandering album song with several sections. It's not part of the 'alien invasion' album by the way, just so no one tries to make lyrical links. 😁 No idea what genre it is.

https://on.soundcloud.com/XGiWL

In The End

Don’t be the one

To scratch the car

If you do

It’s done

Don’t be the one

to hide from ma

Or she’ll get the gun

Home

Home from home

I will take you home

No need to knock on the door

And I alone knew why

If you ask her nicely

She will be your friend

The deal may seem too pricey

Till she’s with you at the end

I tried to ask real nicely

Trusted her like a friend

It never seemed that likely

And she left me in the end

A kiss is all it takes now

A peck and the wind is home (Your home)

Exit with a shrugless bow

And I’m leaving on my own

You don’t try to see me

You'd think that English would be easy to understand,

Yet, though she hears me she is lost in foreign lands.

and

If you ask her nicely

She will be your friend

The deal may seem too pricey

Till she’s with you at the end

If you ask him nicely

He will take before your time

The cost may not seem pricey

But be sure before you sign

Home

take me home

Never ask me why

I’ve always felt alone

And I cannot tell you why

icystorm

Nice groove and eclectic song that brings multipel genres to mind, CCB! Cool vocals, clear production, and a solid mix! I like it! I think this my favorite song from you so far. Good work!

RainyDayMan

That's quite a ride. Has an epic feel to it. Intriguing stuff.

ElvisNash

Alien invasion lol , Good song man

CorkingCrackBand

Hi @icystorm @RainyDayMan @ElvisNash

Cheers for listening and commenting. It's about as good as I'm capable of getting a mix - although I think there's some panning issues. Still getting the hang of using a DAW... I wonder how long I can keep using that excuse! 😁

The album is about 'perspective' and the song intends to disorientate the listener. The lyrics are also a bit phoned in and more intended as a collage than a coherent whole. 👍️

CCB

ElvisNash

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/1048#Comment_1048

Well we all have our excuses lol, Does it matter the world is disorientated anyway

CorkingCrackBand

I’m always oriented expertly toward the nearest restaurant, I’ll have you know, @ElvisNash. The world can do what it likes- it’s not getting between me and my chicken wings.


CCB