The Trouble With Love Songs

https://jgkojak.bandcamp.com/track/the-trouble-with-love-songs
THE TROUBLE WITH LOVE SONGS
I wrote a simple song
For a woman I used to know
It was based on memories
From a song a long time ago
Couldn't find the words
for the thoughts were deep inside my heart
That's where she left her impression
Where my love was torn apart
Once I wrote a simple song
for a woman I used to know
but you can't go back
No you can't go back
No you can't go back
No no no
what's the point of memories
When they only bring you pain
What's the point of love songs
When you listen again and again
I should write a new song
For a woman I've never known
But I can't let go
No I can't let it go
because you can't go back
no you can't go back
I wrote a love song
But I couldn't remember the notes
I wrote a song about hate
But I threw it out into the snow
See I'm caught in the middle
Between the future and the past
That's the trouble with love songs
It's that love just don't last
You can't go back
No you can't go back
Comments
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@jgkojak Your title really caught my eye in the long list! Would love to see it used more in the song instead of just once. And I 'm uncertain which part is the chorus. Or, is there no chorus but a Bridge? Lots of great emotions here however I'm a bit lost in the structure.
Hope I've been helpful in some small way,
Renee
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