The mystical dance of the penguins
https://suno.com/song/69fdcf26-6316-4aba-a5c6-3a393b73d04b
Was going to write a nonsensical song about penguins with conflicting metaphors, but the black and white reminded me of the yin and yang symbol,
[Verse 1]
Raging waves crash against the shore
Like unchained emotions and words
Years of pent-up feelings erupt as
Bonds unravel, spiraling downwards
[Verse 2]
Calm comes from turbulent waters
Raw emotions reveal nature's discord
Only with the passages of seasons
Can universal peace be restored
[Chorus]
Mystical is the dance of the penguins
Like oceans currents gentle ebb and flow
Circadian rhythms of grace and balance
Harmonious trance in the moonlight's glow
[Bridge]
The oceans' clear waters reveal
Reflected images of tortured souls
In Seeking nature's balance and harmony
What was once fractured can now be whole
[Verse 3]
As the dark, cloudy skies begin to clear
The penguins begin to dance a dance
Of slow, rhythmic motions restoring
The harmonic flow of nature's balance
[Chorus]
Mystical is the dance of the penguins
Like oceans currents gentle ebb and flow
Circadian rhythms of grace and balance
Harmonious trance in the moonlight's glow
[Outro]
Like yin and yang, the earth's balance
Is bound by both the moon and sun
One without the other creates dissonance
Together, they mystically dance as one
Comments
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WOW! I read the lyric first and liked it, then followed along again with the music, this was like a short story with music that I didn't want to stop reading. So many great lines and visuals, this could easily be a film score, or just listened to to enjoy. Needless to say I love this.0
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Amazing!0
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FWIW, I don't think the first verse is a well-written as the rest of the lyric. You rhyme "words" with "downwards," and for me, the analogy of unchained emotions and words crashing like raging waves against the shore says pretty much the same thing as saying pent-up feelings erupt. I think you can do better with the first verse. I'll add that in addition to the ying-yang reference naturally connected to the imagery of black and white penguins, you might also consider referencing "black and white" itself somewhere in the lyric - even if it's just a passing reference to something that is or isn't a clear "black and white" proposition. I think that would be cool.
Just my opinion.
David
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I love the title "The mystical dance of the penguins". I'd give it a thumbs up just for that! Penguins are cool.
Vivid, evocative and descriptive lyrics.
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@RainyDayMan thanks for the comment, really appreciate it :)
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