Alone Too Long Lyrics

Kayla813

Confusion sets in
I thought you were my friend
I'm always last
When I cry, it seems like you laugh

This use to be so easy
Everyone got involved
And made it so sleezy
The lack of effort
Makes me so sleepy
I'm all alone too long
Allowed it to become so messy

We'd have to start it over again
But I'm the only one that bends
So what do I do my friend?
I never wanted this too end. . . .

This use to be so easy
Everyone got involved
And made it so sleezy
The lack of effort
Makes me so sleepy
I'm alone too long
Allowed it to become so messy

It takes a long time to rebuild trust
A second to destroy it
I'm not the one that set up traps
And set a bomb to it

This use to be so easy
Everyone got involved
And made it sleezy
The lack of effort
Makes me so sleepy
I'm alone too long
Allowed it to become so messy

HummerWisdom

Hi again, Kayla! Truly like the jest of this lyric; so many can relate. Love your Bridge, "It takes a long time to build trust...." love the rhyming on the 'its' and the meter.

I'm a tad confused in the chorus 'everyone got involved' as to who 'everyone' is. Also, if your opening lines is V1, then it would nice to see V2; 'We'd have to start it over again...' (I'm assuming it's V2) match the rhyme scheme of V1. Hope I've been helpful in some small way.

Write on, lady!

Renee

sidshovel

Nice piece Kayla, relationships can be messy and one-way.

I think you captured that well in your writing.

Sid