New original song - I never thought it would turn out this way
Just recorded on my desk. Song about how you never know how your life will unfold.
https://gloriousmagicalfields.bandcamp.com/track/i-never-thought-it-would-turn-out-this-way
Lyrics:
I'll tell you once
I'll tell you twice
I never thought my life would turn out this way
But it did
And I'm scared
All the way
And it did
And I'm scared
Everyday
And it did
And I'm scared
No way
And it did
Follow my way
Comments
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Great idea to work with, Rob. Seems like the lyric needs more developing. But great start!
Renee
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Like the doubled vocals on this one, and the guitar outro too.
If you wanted to, there's room to explore what happened in their life that made it turn out this way.
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Yes, the doubled vocal is great - it just needs to be louder. This is crying out for bass and drums. This reminds me of a lot rock bands from the late 60's/early 70's. It needs work for sure, but you have some great ideas. Nice guitar playing too.
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Is there anyone here who could put some drums and bass to it?
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It depends. If you've recorded it to a click or a metronome of some sort so that it's in time, then I might be able to put some drums and bass to it. Could perhaps do a mix for you too. All I would need is the beats per minute (BPM). Without this it wouldn't really be possible to keep everything in time. I notice there's two different sections which are I think at different tempos - not necessarily a problem. Also the song in incomplete..do you have the rest of it?
I'm making no promises, but let me know what info you have and I'll certainly take a look. Contact me by DM if you want.
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None of my songs were recorded with anything that sets and keeps the tempo. This particular song is incomplete but some of my others that I posted are. I think it would be interesting to hear how one sounds with drums and possibly other instruments. You could choose if you want from the below Dubover Moor site and then try it if you like and post it here.
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Thanks, but this is as I feared Rob. It would be too big a job and beyond my ability to work on tracks without any set tempos. It isn't impossible, but it would be very time consuming I reckon. It was just an idea.
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No problem. I could try to record something with an online metronome. If I do I will then post it. It would be interesting to hear how it sounds with drums.
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Yes do. I'd certainly give it a try.
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