Original song - Your thoughts are not true
This song is the first song from the album "Compositions from the moor". You can listen to just the first song or more of the album if you care:
https://gloriousmagicalfields.bandcamp.com/album/melodic-compositions-from-the-moor
I was just twenty one
Watching everybody have fun
Yea
I was just dreaming
Yea
I came undone
Well it happened to a friend, too
I hope it don't happen to you
But if it does
Just remember
Your thoughts are not true
I know you're there
And it comes down to this
All the years yo will miss
I'm here to tell you
You aren't real
Everything is space
And you can't feel
Comments
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Wow! What a switch up at the 1 min mark. Couldn't get more contrast from the elec overdriven guitar to the acoustic. And then back again.
I think the music is the star here, as it often is in your songs.
The lyric isn't conveying a whole lot to me. But somewhat abstract lyrics open to interpretation are a genre unto themselves.
I think the vocal would be better mixed more centrally, the hard pan to the left feels a bit out.
Unmistakably your style!
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Rob,
Your style is wasted on an old fuddy duddy like me, but you do have a lot of talent of that there is no doubt.
Your different, and I like that, so good luck in whatever direction you choose.
Enjoy your music a lot, but struggle with this abstract "genre".
Sid
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Nice work! This one has a really cool, Silversun Pick-ups type vibe.
Loved the guitar playing through all of the different changes. Great lyrics too.
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Thanks. I actually like the song so much I wish I didn't write and record it so I could hear it totally new. Alas, that will never be.
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Pretty cool song, @robwills 💌
Renee
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Howdy, Stranger!