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Good song. I can hear this with a full band. Can you add drums easily? I actually like the abrupt end.
Love this line: "The heart on your sleeve’s only paint."
Weirdly, I have a song with the same title that I was getting ready to pos…
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Well, this is a downer😒. It does kind of come across as one long moan, I'm afraid, which doesn't really draw in the listener (at least not this one).
I'm not even going to get into the line that Matt mentions above, other than to say that i…
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Gotta agree with you…
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Very poetic. This kind of nebulous lyric, consisting of a succession of phrases or even words that are only loosely connected by any meaning but together coalesce into a feeling, works better in Romance languages for some reason. To me it has tha…
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Yes, that first version is definitely way too long 😂
Some nice lines here. I like these in particular:
I used to text you, first thing each day
you topped my list, when I sat to pray
For me, it doesn't work with a male v…
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Audiomack won't let me listen. It just keeps playing "You're Too Young." Some kind of a bug with the platform. But hey, it's one of yours, so I'm pretty confident in saying it's great LOL.
Still like to hear it though.
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Thanks Cove. Yes, th…
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Hi Katie. Well, I agree wholeheartedly with the sentiment.
The song has a very loose structure, which some might find problematic. I don't find that a problem, so long as you have an idea in your head about how it all sounds and how it hang…
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It does have a nice vibe, but I can't make out the words. Something about the mix. It took me quite a while to figure out what language it was in.
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The song has a good driving beat to it. Had my foot tapping. "What do you know" is a good simple hook, easy to sing along with. I like the lyric too.
The vocal is a bit wayward. Have you thought of using some kind of pitch correction?
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I'm not sure what this post is about, but I think you're showing us how you can use "robots" to create a kind of scratch tape to indicate to live musicians the basics of the song. Is that right?
I've only ever recorded two songs in Nashvill…
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Thanks Sid. Pour Cho…
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Thanks Owen. Yes, a …
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Dr. Bryan Ardis is a chiropractor. For some reason, a surprising number of chiropractors consider themselves experts on COVID
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Good lyric, especially the chorus. I like these lines.
Some, that will make you laugh.
but most, will make you cry
You started with a vivid image of you going to nursery with your mum. I expected more of that, a series of snapsh…
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Catchy tune and a good simple lyric. I particularly like verse 2. The chorus is basically the same as the verse, as you say - at least until you try out Owen's suggestions - but it doesn't seem to matter.
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I agree with what others have said. This is so much better than the **** that passes for country these days.
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This feels like you're writing from real life. Nothing wrong with that - quite the opposite. However, the listener doesn't know your real life and it's hard to engage with a stranger's emotions. You might try situating us somewhere. Maybe at the …
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The uke and the lead guitar do give it a jazzy feel which is pleasing on the ear. The vocal seems almost more spoken than sung, very laid back in keeping with the jazzy feel.
I don't think I've ever heard of the key of Cmaj7.
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@bhengen Yes, the order was meant to direct them to attack in a completely different direction to stop the Russian…
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Nice to hear something more accessible from you. Not that I don't like your other stuff.
I remember Tennyson's poem. That first line of the chorus is a nicely condensed version of the misunderstood order that led them to charge the wrong gu…
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Tom and I will never agree on politics, I suspect, but we can agree on more important things, like art🙂
He mentions the Rolling Stones. Think of the riffs that begin their songs and on which their songs are built. AI can serve those up - i…
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It's a good lyric, but I think you're missing a chance to give it a bigger emotional punch. The way it's written, it's as if she's explaining the situation to a listener, which is a bit dry. How about you let us follow her inner doubts or turmoil…
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Been there. Written songs about it 😂, or should that be 😪
I like the lyric. Simple, honest, from the heart, as most good songs are. Can you finger pick? I have a feeling you might be able to match the emotional tone better that way than wit…
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Thanks for pointing that out. looks like I was wrong about that.
I was thinking more about the copyright issues that Suno, etc. might face, since they are the ones who could be alleged to be doing the stealing. Could get messy :)
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It's a pretty song and the lyrics fit that pretty melody and voice well. A couple of places where the AI gets the phrasing a little wrong, like the word "spending." Lots of good imagery. I like the echo of the nursery rhyme, "Mary, Mary, quite co…
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Thanks Carroll. I wa…
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@bhengen My comments were general, not directed at anyone in particular. I don't see laziness in your lyrics at al…
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I think sometimes there's confusion between abstract and obscure. An abstract painting aims to create a response in the viewer by the use of colors, shapes and sometimes textures, independent of any meaning. It doesn't depict anything recognizabl…
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Thanks to all who commented. @RainyDayMan - a modern classic might be going a little far, although it's the on…
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