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Great lyric - "Could it be I’m just not her?" - that's heartbreaking. The fact that it's delivered with this jaunty melody only adds to that.
Happy Valentine's Day
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Very pleasant listen. The flutes give it a kind of Andean feel in places along with the jazzy vibe. Made me want to hear pan pipes 🙂
I like the way it builds.
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I heard this before somewhere else. Loved it then, love it now :)
Attitude with humor!
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To be honest, nobody is going to understand the chorus as anything but suicide or murder. Also, to be honest, nobody is going to understand anything else in the song. I get the feeling you're OK with that. 🙂
It does have some lines that I l…
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@bhengen Thanks. I had never heard of Dr. Dimento until I started posting songs and people kept bringing him up LO…
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It's a strange concept, but it works as the basis for a song. Without the explanation, I doubt that the listener would grasp precisely what is meant, but it creates a feeling in which we are content to let it just wash over us. Suno does a good j…
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Great lyric and melody as usual and a great production. Some killer lines in there:
At least for a while you killed the lonely
You made me feel a little younger
I made you feel a little older
But…
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There's a school of thought that in this type of song you should be as specific as you can with details - the dog's name, for instance. The more of this information you give, the more real the picture painted by the song. I think I agree with tha…
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I got the basic version of Melodyne back when it was pretty inexpensive I believe it's $99 now, although maybe they have a sale from time to time. I was dubious at first because I associated pitch correction with a distorted sound, but I have to …
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Thanks Owen. You obvious…
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I really like this. I don't know that I've ever heard a song that used finger-picked uke instead of strumming. It has a very spare, stripped-down sound that ties in with the dreamy quality. Your voice works well on this one too, although I wonder…
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I agree with Elvis. The best I've heard from you. The melody is catchy and flows naturally.
As usual, I have a couple of suggestions :)
"Freedom is a good thing" seems a little weak, How about "Freedom is a beautiful thing?"
You…
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I like it. Like Elvis, I noticed the cool chord progression. It's not too schmaltzy. I think it has the right quantity of schmaltz.
Do you have a paid account at SoundCloud? If so, you can put a song up there with a private link shared here…
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I don't think there is anything wrong with posting political songs. It's on us to respond on how they work as songs, not on the merits of the ideas expressed, and make suggestions as to how they might be improved as songs, not to change his mind …
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It's a good lyric, proud and wistful at the same time, and the AI treatment fits it well. I got a good sense of who this person was.
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I like the approach. Humor is always the best way to approach politics, not that this is really trying to make a political point (thank goodness 😄). More of an observation of life. Catchy tune, although to me it seems to get a bit lost at the end…
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Yes, it's an accordion. …
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Thanks for listening, Re…
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Certainly an unusual angle. If I understand you correctly, the message is that we should move away from the traditional symbolism of Christ on the cross and the infant Jesus and focus entirely on Christ enthroned in Heaven. Many Christians might …
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Great lyric, as usual :). I wasn't a fan of what AI did with it at first, but it grew on me and I was liking it by the end.
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Very nice. Amazing what EZ Keys, etc. can do in skilled hands. I like the introduction of the pizzicato strings around the 2 minute mark. Adds variety.
Lyrically, I wonder if it might benefit from a few more visuals, putting us there with t…
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Another great one, Elvis. You have a unique way of putting across a song. I like the message. No matter what our religious beliefs, we can feel that sense of wonder you describe. Very relatable. Good luck with the streaming stuff.
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Nice to meet you too Renee. I was on here fairly regularly a while back but then a bunch of things got in the way of spending much time on music related things. Glad to be back :)
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Works for me. A lot of heart. Listening to it, I found myself liking your Dad a lot and also liking you for loving him as you did. A good song can do that :)
There are a few places where you don't seem comfortable cramming a lot of words in…
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Pretty melody. I'm not a huge fan of the lyric. It's decipherable with your intro, but it seems to be asking a lot of hard work for little reward from the listener, who is unlikely to care either way about the subject. Give them something they ca…
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I've been away for a while, Chris - a lot of stuff going on, not much time for music. Great to come back and find you still kicking it. Love this. Yeah, it's old fashioned - nothing more old fashioned than the idea that someone could blow up the …
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AI is a bit hit or miss, I guess. This seems like a miss. I think your prompts were spot on, but Suno seems to have ignored them😕.
If this lyric is to work, it probably needs a slower more esoteric musical treatment in keeping with the prot…
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Great song. You demoed this two years ago? Did you pitch it? This feels commercial in a Nashville kind of way. Broken heart, encounter at the bar... Great hook too.
"She's not coming back to you, you fool." What a great line! Simple, conver…
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Very cute song, and not just because I love birds too. A great old timey folk vibe to it, especially with the repeated beginning of each verse's first line: "I might as well be..." The melody fits the lyric like a glove.
A couple of lines t…
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I think Renee is pointing you in a good direction with her lyric suggestions. The lyric feels like a good beginning rather than a finished work.
It's hard to comment on the musical aspects because of the quality of the recording. If I read …
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