You Just Can't Stop It
Some more country...
SUNO: https://suno.com/song/beaf71cd-850d-45f7-8a14-4a4714a82866
ORIGINAL: https://soundcloud.com/sean-swindler/02-you-just-cant-stop-it
YOU JUST CAN'T STOP IT
[Verse 1]
You just can't stop it
When it's coming down
No you just can't stop it
When love can't be found
[Verse 2]
You just can't stop it
Except every now and then
Oh you just can't stop it
Why does love always seem to end
[Chorus]
Maybe everyday I shouldn't be so surprised
By the look of love or the look of hate when I look into your eyes
[Verse 3]
Oh you just can't stop it
No matter where you go
Oh you just can't stop it
Been searching high and low
[Chorus]
For a way to stop it
But I sow the seeds of doubt
Oh you just can't stop it
But do I live without
[Verse 4]
Something everyone needs to think about
When love is gone and you don't belong
Just how do you live without
[Verse 5]
Now you just can't stop it
Yeah, something I don't know
How do I stop it?
By listening to the radio
[Chorus]
You see, heard that a honky-tonk station play a sad, sad country song
Told me everything that I need to know about how to move along
[Verse 6]
It said, you just can't stop it
It's like a train across your heart
Yeah, you just can't stop it
When you don't know how it starts
[Chorus]
Well, heard that a honky-tonk station play a sad, sad country song
Told me everything I need to know and how to move along
[Verse 7]
Now, you just can't stop it
Yeah, there's so many things you just don't know
If you don't know how to stop it
You better listen to the radio
listen now
Comments
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Well I don't know what it is that you just can't stop. But maybe that's intentional to keep you guessing?
It reads like a love gone wrong song, but with the focus ...elsewhere. And the ending seemed a little odd, listening to the radio.
The melody is very easy to listen to, but it didn't lodge in my brain afterwards.
Honestly, I don't think this is your best.
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It sounds like a break-up song, And I think you mean listen to the radio as a form of comfort, but that's not really clear. it seems like a forced rhyme know / radio. maybe show would be better?
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Yup I have no idea what your trying to stop , You did the same thing on letting go , letting go what . I'm sure you won't take my advice , But he lays it out great
https://www.amazon.com/Song-Building-Mastering-SongTown-Songwriting/dp/1543977901
Read it about 300 times , I'm stupid I read it 500 times
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