Ocean Blue River of Tears
Thought I'd try a duet
https://suno.com/song/fd4ceb9a-8245-4816-9df2-44b037c1644c
OCEAN BLUE RIVER OF TEARS
[Male]
I was in love with you beneath a clear blue sky
So what is it now that brings a tear to your eye
[Female]
You say you'd rather be alone
and I want us to stay together
If it's not about our love
maybe it's about the weather
[Male]
Maybe there's a flood
coming down the mountainside,
and you looked around
and found
no place to hide
[Chorus]
[Male and Female]
Cry me a river if you want to
Wade through the ocean and the water is blue
I'd die for you baby, if you want me to
Ocean blue river of tears, oh oh oh, ocean blue river
[Male]
And no matter how high the river or the tide
I will make it through the water baby,
maybe it's just my pride
I'll face the waves of a storming sea
and I won't be denied
[Male and Female]
Cry me a river if you want to
Wade through the ocean and the water is blue
I'd die for you baby, if you want me to
Ocean blue river of tears, oh oh oh, ocean blue river of tears
[Female]
Ocean blue river of tears, yeah, yeah, yeah
No matter the wind, no matter the rain baby, no matter what I have to go through
[Male and Female]
You know I'll always find my way, my way back to you
Cry me a river if you want to
Wade through the ocean and the water is blue
I'd die for you baby, if you want me to
Ocean blue river of tears, oh oh oh, ocean blue river of tears
(Ooh-ooh) Ocean blue river of tears, oh, ocean blue river of tears, yeah
Comments
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This one doesn't really do it for me. Feels a little bland.
The lines seem a little uneven across verses, some longer/shorter
Not sure about a flood coming down the mountainside. Maybe that happens, but it feels wrong.
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its either a ocean or a river , not both , it makes no sense
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Ocean of tears is a cliche , Blue River of tears works , I'd go there . just a suggestion , actually they're both cliches
Need a fresher hook
Try that , now its not a cliche
An ocean of blue, and every drop’s a regret
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