Ocean Blue River of Tears

Thought I'd try a duet

https://suno.com/song/fd4ceb9a-8245-4816-9df2-44b037c1644c


OCEAN BLUE RIVER OF TEARS

[Male]

I was in love with you beneath a clear blue sky

So what is it now that brings a tear to your eye

[Female]

You say you'd rather be alone 

and I want us to stay together

If it's not about our love

maybe it's about the weather

[Male]

Maybe there's a flood

coming down the mountainside, 

and you looked around

and found

no place to hide


[Chorus]

[Male and Female]

Cry me a river if you want to

Wade through the ocean and the water is blue

I'd die for you baby, if you want me to

Ocean blue river of tears, oh oh oh, ocean blue river


[Male]

And no matter how high the river or the tide

I will make it through the water baby, 

maybe it's just my pride

I'll face the waves of a storming sea 

and I won't be denied


[Male and Female]

Cry me a river if you want to

Wade through the ocean and the water is blue

I'd die for you baby, if you want me to

Ocean blue river of tears, oh oh oh, ocean blue river of tears


[Female]

Ocean blue river of tears, yeah, yeah, yeah

No matter the wind, no matter the rain baby, no matter what I have to go through

[Male and Female]

You know I'll always find my way, my way back to you


Cry me a river if you want to

Wade through the ocean and the water is blue

I'd die for you baby, if you want me to

Ocean blue river of tears, oh oh oh, ocean blue river of tears

(Ooh-ooh) Ocean blue river of tears, oh, ocean blue river of tears, yeah

Comments

  • This one doesn't really do it for me. Feels a little bland.

    The lines seem a little uneven across verses, some longer/shorter

    Not sure about a flood coming down the mountainside. Maybe that happens, but it feels wrong.

  • its either a ocean or a river , not both , it makes no sense

  • ElvisNash
    ElvisNash Calif
    edited January 24

    Ocean of tears is a cliche , Blue River of tears works , I'd go there . just a suggestion , actually they're both cliches

    Need a fresher hook


    Try that , now its not a cliche

    An ocean of blue, and every drop’s a regret

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