Comin Atcha
Can't say I didn't warn ya...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sjd4EKWbZ9E
Intro Tag
Feelings change but I didn’t see it
Love broke bad left me numb
Got on my knees trying to find it again
There was nothin but crumbs
Now where’d this crazy winter come from
Deep dark chill got me asking
When will the year get a little bit older
Now I got my chin on my shoulder
You keep your eyes up
You keep looking around
From Alabama up to Alaska
Something’s comin atcha
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When I was young me and my friends
Got in the poison just for fun
One day we all looked around
There was nothing left but crumbs
There’s a bad day headed your way
I heard a voice in my head say
I’m trying now just to get a little older
With my chin on my shoulder
There’s a hurricane headed your way
Can you feel it in the breeze today
Sneakin up from behind ya
Look what’s comin atcha
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There’s a train flyin down the track
Gonna run right up your back
Can’t say I didn’t warn ya
About what’s comin atcha
Yeah the past caught up while you were out runnin
Bet you didn’t see that comin
From California to New Hampshire
Something’s comin atcha
Comments
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cool sound. I can't figure out if what is coming is going to be good or bad. I guess its up to the listener to decide. i'm going to go with he gets together with a girl from his past he didn't expect but was inevitable. Sorry if i'm totally missing your intent.
This would make a great Punk Rock song too.
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A very catchy tune. I love the vocals and melody, and you and the band did a great job.
Lyrically, some of the lines didn't make sense to me and seemed forced.
I enjoyed the listen. Keep up the great work!
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I hear it as a set of different scenes and in each one something coming atcha
Always enjoy your guitar work!
Nice song. Enjoyed my listen.
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Hey thanks ya'll for listening...and remember...
car accidents, cyber-attacks, stock market crashes, broken relationships, broken car expenses, burglaries, assault and batteries, bird poop falling from the sky, meteorites, death of loved ones, dog bites, divorces, deep fake scams, natural disasters, job layoffs, identity theft, house fires, health issues, hit and runs...yeah, there’s always sumpin.
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This is fabulous. A bit Lo-fi and that's what I love about it. I needed a shot of something like this to cheer me up. And it has! A great track.😀
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Hey thanks for your kind words Chris...remember to keep your chin on your shoulder...its a great neck stretch and you can potentially see bad things sneaking up from behind you😉
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ok , that about covers what's going at us
Sounds good blues man
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yeah I don't have to tell ya, always sumpin
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No kidding , lets say that like Mister Rogers , We don't want seem vulgar
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A real "early day Springsteen" vibe to this as I listen. Not that it sounds like any of his songs, but the vocal vibe is very "Springsteen-ish."
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Thanks buddy
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Good stuff! Is this a band you are part of? How are you making your recordings?
Like I've said... Good stuff!
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hey thanks my friend. I'm working with three different on-line producers and a DAW, Logic Pro, to create finished original songs. I'm playing guitar and singing on all of them, thanks again for your comment.
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This is great - I hear a Lindsey Buckingham/Tusk/"The Ledge" or "Not That Funny" kind of sound on here that I really like -
Very cool arrangement and love the guitar parts - not easy to pull off as well as you do
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Hi
Nice rocker with a retro feel
subvibe
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Howdy, Stranger!