Machines
MACHINES
https://suno.com/song/12e93f26-a0be-43f6-af50-b6b789d916be
(original: https://suno.com/song/b04c63a1-2c88-480b-8fc2-89e1127b397d
[Verse 1]
When the restless children come
For the healer man
Seeking absolution on the altar of the land
Though the only eyes that can see
What they cannot hear
Driven from their lonely home to the vestibules of fear
[Chorus]
Let it go, let it go, let it all go down in flames
After all it's just a show, but the names remain the same
[Verse 2]
When the first gun cries at the darkest dawn
And the wanderers wander, sleeping on the lawn
And in the empty sky appears a single brightest light
All the children run to the sun to survive the night
[Chorus]
Let it go, let it go, let it all go down in flames
After all it's just a show, but the names remain the same
[Verse 3]
There are no preachers here, no wise men of the age
Only these empty books ripped from the page
And the innocent eyes looking for knowledge in the sheen
You can try but you can't hide from the machine
[Chorus]
Let it go, let it go, let it all go down in flames
After all it's just a show, but the names remain the same
[Chorus]
Let it go, let it go, let it all go down in flames
After all it's just a show, but the names remain the same
Comments
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That chorus is very strong.
It's got a poetic style to it, the meaning feels a bit hidden. One to ponder on perhaps.
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I agree with RainyDayMan that chorus is money.
great melody. not exactly sure what its about, has a real 60s-70s feel to me. perhaps a veiled commentary on the times we are living in?
I appreciate how you post the original and the Suno versions, it super interesting, like looking at a before and after photo.
well done.
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i couldn't put my finger on it earlier, sounds a lot like Let it Be.
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It does sound like let it be :).. I could be not reading this correctly, but it reads like an anti AI song.
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Yes - the original thought was the negative influence social media access has on children - lyrics got a little cryptic
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Ah, I see that now.. welcome to my world, writing things that nobody gets :)
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10 seconds in and yes there is more than a hint of 'Let It Be' going on here. And I spotted that before I read anything else on here. So there's the danger - the material that's used to train Suno and the rest is sometimes a bit too obvious. So said, this does sound very impressive. It's a really good song. I love it and I really like the lyrics.
I'm repeating myself I know but, but when I check out the original I hear the voice of the guy who wrote it and how it was put together. In spite of any imperfections, it's what I want to hear. I guess it's the musician in me.
Keep doing what you do. It's great.😀
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Good song, and I love that you posted the original. I like to do the same. It's a good song, and it really shines with the suno production. Kudos.
As far as "Let It Be" I feel it's miles apart. I wouldn't have thought of it if it weren't pointed out. I hear slight parallels, but don't "fret".
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