smart
Hi
Here is a new song i have done , its simple & moody
https://soundcloud.com/subvibe-958077223/smart
I want to be brave
I want to be smart
I want to be saved
I want a new start
I'm constantly being pushed
pushed to the edge
knock me down, now I'm crushed
I'm falling over the ledge
people tell me it's going to be all right
but how much longer do I have to fight?
We're not too far behind now
change is something I want to allow
a little further up is where our future lies
from here on out, all I'll do is rise
Thanks for taking the time to listen
subvibe
Comments
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Weird but good melody. kind of moves sideways. who is the vocalist?
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Nice! I like the chill vibe. At first I was wondering if it was at odds with the lyric, but then they turn a corner and it's about choosing to be smart and positive and they came together.
(and thanks for posting the lyric!)
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Hi Vibe,
I love the melody! If you are going for a chill affirmation song, you have succeeded!
Overall: Enjoyed the listen.
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Hola @subvibe
As I commented on other site this ones wonderful, I love the harmony you have created as well as the instruments chosen, and the vocals are splendid!!! What a wonderful sound!!
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I'm a sucker for these kinds of brief psychological studies/statements - I love the melody here, it feels like this could have been a Stevie NIcks song on Tusk with different production
Very nice job
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Very interesting. Reminds me of Bjork. I dug this type of stuff way back in my 20s.
I like how you took a pretty short lyric and were able to turn it into a full song.
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Pretty sparse lyric wise , Sounds real good though
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thanks for listening
yes its a bit of a challenge trying to spread out a few lines to 3 mins
subvibe
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Nice song and sound. It's not Suno. Never-the-less, it sounds pretty good.
Who's singing? Nice voice.
Love the writing.
Kudos
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