I Am (Remix)
Words me (not the best, but, you know.. :)), Music Suno
this seems to be all over the place review wise, people aren't sure what to make of it.
Another one, I re-did the original. I think this version is better
https://suno.com/s/tiHEW8Sa0caKfu6L
Original:
https://suno.com/s/WO99h8pgdvusYJIp
[Verse 1]
I wake up, not as myself
Transformed as somebody else
My reflection not really me
A parallel of my reality
[Chorus - Anthemic Choir | Powerful Layered Vocals | Syncopated]
I am here, there (and everywhere)
I am this time, (that time, no time)
I am particles (encoding the air)
I am multi-versed (in cosmic rhyme)
[Verse 2]
Always entering thru revolving doors
Of rotating universes spinning round
A paradox of knowns and unknowns
At ends are new beginnings found
[Drop]
[Chorus - Anthemic Choir | Powerful Layered Vocals | Syncopated]
I am here, there (and everywhere)
I am this time, (that time, no time)
I am particles (encoding the air)
I am multi-versed (in cosmic rhyme)
[Guitar solo]
[Verse 3 - Introspective]
In death does the mind wither and die
Or live in quantum states of immortality
Cosmic bar hopping from one to the next
Eternal infinities of actualities
[Chorus - Anthemic Choir | Powerful Layered Vocals | Syncopated]
I am here, there (and everywhere)
I am this time, (that time, no time)
I am particles (encoding the air)
I am multi-versed (in cosmic rhyme)
[Outro - Spoken Rap]
Now I lay me down to sleep,
I pray the cosmos my soul to keep;
If I should die before I 'wake,
I pray the cosmos my soul to take.
[Final Line – Spoken | Silence | End Track]
I am here, there, and everywhere
Comments
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Hello Bill,
It might just be that I'm more old school, but I prefer the original version best. Gave you a like on it.
Best to you
Tex
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Thanks for the comment, Tex.
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I like the new version more. It feels more creative. Nothing wrong with the original, but it's less distinct.
The new version is a bit choppy and staccato and maybe that's putting some people off, not sure. But it works for me!
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Thanks owen. that could be it.
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Pretty deep Bill , New version sounds fine to me
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Thanks elvis :)
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