"Broken- Commandment"

ElvisNash

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eK8Do5MGLlo

Mason Douglass studio Nashville Tenn,

Bz Lewis studio Oakland Ca.

I could've loved you forever

like the Baptist preacher said

For better or worse but however

You Ignored words in gospel red

You're in a Motel in Atlanta

I'm home alone in Alabama

ch

Black dress fell on a floor

Bible in a drawer

Your one night stand

destroyed a man

That's for damn sure

Saviors hanging on a blood soaked cross

For your broken commandment

v2

You pretend to be the angel

Do you deny dancing with the devil ?

It doesn't add up you being faithful

Catching you in them deceitful lies

Are you suffering in damnation

Hey Girl I’m counting on that

Ch

Bridge

Should I break one myself

Pull the 38 trigger

You first in hell

Ch

Black dress fell on a floor

Bible in a drawer

Your last one night stand

destroyed a man

Thats for damn sure

Saviors hanging on a blood soaked cross.

For my broken commandment

For her broken commandment

To late for broken commandments

ChrisPrice

What a wonderful track! If I didn't know you via this forum, I'd go out and buy an album of your songs. I'm biased cos this really is my kind of music, but there's no harm in me telling a fellow musician that I really admire what you do. It's an inspiration. Keep 'em comin...😀

ElvisNash

Hey Chris !
“Do people even buy music anymore ?
This 2020 car has no C.D. Player : maybe it’s digital players in cars “
Thanks buddy !!

MPDudash

Elvis, very cool lines in this one. The references are very strong. It all comes together very nicely, and most of all, it’s relatable.

ElvisNash

"Well I killed her... in the end"

"Carrie Underwood ... Killed him in : Two Black Cadillac's"

"She got away with it "

Thanks MP

ElvisNash

MPDudash

Who’s to say we can’t relate? 😂 JK government! The rest of it is very relatable.

ElvisNash

"Killing someone ? Well its in every Net Flix movie "

"They were a happy couple , The chilling story of Rebeca and Tom " "But first a commercial from Gieko "

"Will Georgia police find the gun in a swamp ?" Oh the drama thickens "

remfire

Hi Elvis Nash
your text is good and not predictable. with a few good hooks. a good life lesson. so a good story. which is well presented by the music. but there is something going on with your clip on youtube. it stops halfway .I think you should take a look at it.but all in all super good!! (Got the book in)
Thanks for the tips

Let me know if i have to check
Your klip again

ElvisNash

"Works fine for me"

Thanks man

"Good -Luck on the book .... read it 500- times"