Not your creation
Words Me; Music Suno
https://suno.com/s/GXrBq03upBVbAP3o
[Verse 1]
I am bound by thin golden strands
Feared by what's threatened
But I am - not - that powerful
[Refrain]
I am not that which you made of me
[Verse 2]
You, believer of false prophets
Kisser of forked tongue serpents
Bind me by mistaken truths
[Refrain]
I am not that which you made of me
[Bridge - Instrumental Break]
[Verse 3]
Cold steel between my jaws
Tempering my words
Yet they slice rivers from stone
[Outro]
I am not that which you made of me
I am confined by not what I see
Comments
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Well It's been a while since I've posted anything on here. Here goes!
I would have called this "Induststrial Metal."
The notion of two vocalist offset one-another quite really well and makes it seem like real conversation.
The verses don't seem to follow the more traditional rhymingand syllable conventions one would expect, but it seems to work in this style. I assume the AI is syncopating the lyrical delivery? Overall, it delivers a unique flavour I don't hear all too often.
Nicely done
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Thanks Billy, for giving it a listen! I really appreciate you taking the time to comment.
Yeah, the industrial‑metal label makes sense — that’s definitely the territory I was aiming for. The dual‑vocal approach was intentional too; I wanted the two voices to feel like they were pushing against each other rather than just harmonizing.
As for the verses, you’re right: they don’t follow a strict rhyme or meter. I leaned into a more free, spoken‑rhythmic delivery and let the production handle the syncopation. The AI vocal engine actually handled that part better than I expected.
Glad the overall vibe landed for you. Thanks again for the feedback!
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i like the smooth clear vocal paired with the aggressive beat/ guitar. Usually this type of music distorts the vocal in some way.
this sounds really good. well done.
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Whats this song suppose to be about , I'm curious ?
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Thanks Muskie
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Originally about Fenrir the wolf in Norse mythology, then the more I read into it sounded more like Freud, Verse 1 is he superego, verse 2 is the ego and verse 3 is the ID. the song is essentially about the self
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Ahh I see , its a good one , unusual
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Thanks Elvis .
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I like the music. Strong beat helps there, but it's quite compelling overall.
I like the poetic nature of the lyric, but even with your explanation I have troubling marrying it up. It's likely going to be beyond most people.
But I'm happy just to sit back and listen and enjoy it.
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Thanks Owen, As long as you enjoy it in your own way works :)
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Don't tell em that , then he'll start going off people who smoke pot and burn vanilla incense will get his song lol
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Think about it Elvis. you walk in to either a biker bar, or a country bar and this is playing, what would you think :)_😂
I also didn't mention that the verses and lines within the verses are based on propositional logic, which is why they are structured the way they are 😂
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Ha ha ha just kidding ya man
What I think , no idea0
Howdy, Stranger!