TEQUILA OR THE GIRL

https://suno.com/song/f00e4f68-798f-40b3-b6e2-977409a3a467


Verse 1

She walks in like last call lightning

Salt on her lips, trouble in her eyes

Bottle on the bar says, “Don’t fight it”

She says, “Boy, you better decide.”


One’s clear as sin in a shot glass

One’s brown-eyed and twice as strong

One’ll put me flat on my back

One’ll keep me up all night long


Pre-Chorus

Bartender says, “Son, make your choice.”

Like judgment day’s got my voice


Chorus

Tequila or the girl

Either way I’m gonna fall

One’ll burn my throat going down

One’ll burn my whole damn soul

One’ll leave me broke by morning

One’ll leave me wrecked for life

Salt, lime, or lipstick swirl

Lord, I know which hurts worse

Tequila… or the girl


Verse 2

Bottle don’t ask where I’ve been

Don’t throw my past back in my face

That girl keeps receipts and memories

Like love’s a court case

Pre-Chorus

Bartender wipes that counter slow

Says, “Son, you already know.”


Bridge (short, mean)

If I quit the bottle, I still shake

If I quit that woman, my heart breaks

One’ll kill me slow and steady

One’ll make me feel it every day


Final Chorus (commit to it)

Tequila or the girl

I can’t carry both

One wants forever

One just wants my soul

She’s crying by the doorway

Says, “You don’t have to choose.”

I slide that shot across the bar

And say, “Yeah… I do.”

And say, “Yeah… I do.”

Comments

  • bhengen
    bhengen usa
    edited February 12

    You can't screw a shot glass, but you can get screwed by one :)

  • ha ha , So who does he choose , I left it open ended

  • MuskieBait44
    MuskieBait44 Great White North

    This is really cool. Very cinematic I was listening but felt like I was watching a movie scene. I like the perspective that he has to choose the lesser of 2 evils. i'll have to come back and listen to this some more.

    one tweak suggestion: Lord, I know which hurts worse => Lord, I Don't know which hurts worse. Reinforce the suspense that he hasn't even made up his mind yet.

    i'd pick the girl. 😉

  • ElvisNash
    ElvisNash Calif
    edited February 12

    Well we don't know that , cuz I left it opened ended , if he picked the girl or Tequila . it's the same deal in a Arny movie , He kills the man and cartel that killed his wife . Now his shot in the chest , as he smiles and the movie ends . WE don't know if walked out or died in that bar . For a few moments you think , I wonder what happened when it ends

  • Tex
    Tex Arkansas

    Hell Elvis, you can have the Tequila, I'll take the girl. That's gonna kill me anyway. ☠️

  • ElvisNash
    ElvisNash Calif
    edited February 13

    Yup being married can kill you, You die of being annoyed , Ok one vote for keeping the girl

  • I think that depends on who you're with. after 37 years, I'm still here ;)

  • ElvisNash
    ElvisNash Calif
    edited February 13

    They're all annoying after the honeymoon is over. I'll go with he picked the tequila and found a girl less demanding . Marriage is basically cell mates . boys night out and whiskey was discovered after the first 100 marriages took place. We have to spend our wholes lives with the same women ? Let's get drunk . Then Nashville added trucks and dirt roads for color . The steel guitar you hear is basically representing I've been married for 30 years . That lonesome sound . Well thats all got on jokes , My Rotary cuff tear is killing me , pain pills please

  • You see what I'm telling ya'll that song was sung by Billie Joe McAllister. You see he chose the tequila then jumped off that bridge 

    We still don't know why 

    You see that original thinking , Not I think its all a matter of perspective

  • No, I was only referring to your comment. - They're all annoying after the honeymoon is over. I'll go with he picked the tequila and found a girl less demanding . Marriage is basically cell mates . boys night out and whiskey was discovered after the first 100 marriages took place. We have to spend our wholes lives with the same women ? Let's get drunk . Then Nashville added trucks and dirt roads for color . The steel guitar you hear is basically representing I've been married for 30 years . That lonesome sound . Well thats all got on jokes , My Rotary cuff tear is killing me , pain pills please, not the song.

  • "She walks in like last call lightning" what a great opening line!

    "One’ll put me flat on my back" - sounds like they both might do that!

    Really cool vibe. I like how it invites the listener to decide which they might choose.

    Good stuff Elvis. Like it.

  • ElvisNash
    ElvisNash Calif
    edited 12:39PM

    if mankind never had original thinking , we''d still be in a cave writing on walls with a rock, Every thing on this planet you see use ect is from original thinking

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