The Trouble With Love Songs
SUNO: https://suno.com/song/112713fa-3e6b-4124-8c72-47e844cfd623
ORIGINAL: https://jgkojak.bandcamp.com/track/the-trouble-with-love-songs
THE TROUBLE WITH LOVE SONGS
[Verse 1]
I wrote a simple song
For a woman I used to know
It was based on memories
From a song a long time ago
Couldn't find the words
But the thoughts were deep inside my heart
That's where she left her impression
Where my love was torn apart
[Instrumental]
[Verse 2]
Once I wrote a simple song
For a woman I used to know
But you can't go back
No, you can't go back
No, you can't go back
(Oh no, no)
[Verse 3]
What's the point of memories
When they only bring you pain
What's the point of love songs
When you listen again and again
I should write a new song
For a woman I've never known
But I can't let go
No, I can't let go
Cause you can't go back
No, you can't go back
[Verse 4]
I wrote a love song
And I couldn't remember the notes
I wrote a song about hate
And I threw it out into the snow
You see I'm caught in the middle
Between the future and the past
That's the trouble with love songs
Is that love just don't last
You can't go back
No, you can't go back
(Oh no, no)
Comments
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Big hit with Kelly Clarkson .. But enjoyed your version , So did Hunter Hayes . So all three of you are in the same boat
Good job man
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good melody. one suggestion is to make verse 2 the chorus, and then remove the repetitive phrasing :)
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Very meta, writing a song about writing a song!
Like the melody in this. Gentle and easy, with the "No you can't go back"s in there for dynamic contrast.
I'm sure most everyone will have felt something similar at some point.
Works well.
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i agree, melody is very nice.
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Melody is very nice, I like it.... But I will disagree with one line that love doesn't last, it does but it might just be one sided.😛
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