Rivers Between Us
Hi
done a new song Its in a melodic EDM style
Stream Rivers Between Us by subvibe | Listen online for free on SoundCloud
Thanks for taking the time to Listen
subvibe
Comments
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Not one of your best ones , But still good , Drum machines kinda drive me nuts
Good job , You should use a pic , kind hard relating to a white thing with crooked eyes
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ha ha ha there ya go
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I left you a comment on Soundcloud.
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Would you mind posting the lyrics here on TSF along with the link to your songs?
I understand that lyrics may be secondary for some EDM songs but it does make it easier to comment on them.
Vocals seem a bit muddy in the mix to me.
The ending felt a bit weak. The fade out seemed to come out of nowhere. It stopped rather than ended.
This one didn't really grab me.
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i agree its not one of my best , but i keep trying something different
We used to dance
In the pouring rain
Now we just stare
At each other through a windowpane
I reach out
But youre a current I cant hold
Youre so warm
But now youre eyes are cold
The rivers between us
Keep pulling me down
Drowning in the silence
Cant hear a sound
But youre on the shore
Im lost in the flood
Still calling your name
Through the water and mud
The rivers between us
You float through dreams
But youre out of reach
Like a tide that just wont return
To the beach
subvibe
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I like this and it has a lot of potential - this mix is way too hot -
you should probably cut the levels on everything in half then adjust from there
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Hi
It was all -12 db then mixed/mastered to -14 Lufs
thanks for your comments
subvibe
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I don't know too much about EDM as I don't really listen to that genre. It sounds right to me, has that ethereal, dreamy vibe. I agree with the others that the ending is a bit awkward as it kind of just fades out randomly. I thought the rest was good though, even if the vocals did get a bit muddy like RDM said. Overall I'd say its a solid song for that style. If others are saying its not your best, then you've definitely got talent because I still think its pretty good.
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