proxima

subvibe

Hi

Here is a new song i have done , its up tempo pop/rock

https://soundcloud.com/subvibe-958077223/proxima

 

Stars so close

But out of reach

Its a dream

That I cant keep

Follow you

Into the dark

Youre just beyond

Like a distant spark

 

Youre the light that guides my way

In the distance

Where shadows play

Were so close

But yet so far

Feel your heartbeat

Worlds apart

 

Proxima

Shining bright

Youre so close

Yet out of sight

Feel you there

Worlds away

So close so far

Cant find my way

 

I see your light

But its out of sight

Fading into endless night

Dreaming but youre out of reach

Like a message lost

On an endless beach

Thanks for taking the time to listen

subvibe

bhengen

@subvibe - great song. I like the melody. the repeating theme is perfect for the EDM genre, since built on repetition. well done :)

subvibe

Hi @bhengen

Thanks for listening , its a bit different than my usual laid back stuff

subvibe

bhengen

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/15982#Comment_15982

sometimes it's good to break ranks and try something different.

ElvisNash

Sounds good , nice percussion going on

RainyDayMan

The music is the highlight for me, that sounds really tight.

The lyric is fine, but a tad generic. But I feel like the emphasis is on the sound anyway in this song, and there it's strong.

MoraAmaroLaLoba

Hola @subvibe

here I am, commenting while listening to your new song!!! Nice sound and special percussion!! Noa vemos!!