She's Everything?
I've been working 7 days a week for a few months, I sensed that my wife was feeling low, and a little ignored since we haven't had much time for ourselves lately. I wrote this one for her hoping it helps her to smile again. I'm really happy that AI is available to me to bring my words into a media I can share with her, cause words are all I have to offer. Not sure about the title.
Comments
-
No diamond ring could say it better.
That's a class act!
Sid
1 -
We will see if it works to bring that smile back Sid, the diamond would have worked for sure.
0 -
Dang @Barry ! This is a hit with any woman and you know they love putting women high on the pedestal in today's country music! Not, that we shouldn't be!
And I'm sorry you're having to work so much; sort 'a sucks the joy out 'a life. I hope your hard work pays off!
Dumb question to ask, but how did your wife like the song?
And YES! "She's Everything" is the perfect title! What woman wouldn't want to be everything to her man? And I especially love your pre-chorus in all it's simplicity, very meaningful.
Okay, on my second time around looking closer at the lyric. As stated, I love your pre-chorus and I see now, that you've used it as the last 2 lines of your chorus as well. I'm hearing something like the following:
"The way she laughs when she cries
How she sees through my disguise"
How she knows me like nobody else does
She’s everything I ever wanted in a woman
She’s everything this man loves
That's my take and I hope I haven't been too forward and of course, it's YOUR song to do as you like.
Beautiful song, Barry,
Renee
0 -
Hey Renee, thanks for the comments, the listen, and the time. Short answer, I sent it to her as a text as I am (you guessed it) at work lol, it sounded like she was smiling when she called me crying. I finished it last night after she went to bed, so she had no idea it was coming.
As far as the suggestion, there is no way I can change it now that she's heard it. The reason I wrote it the way I did was to make the 3rd line rhyme with the 6th, and truthfully, I needed to finish it and get to bed. Thanks again for the kind words.
1 -
Thanks, @Barry for answering my question. I couldn't imagine your wife not loving the song as it is.
Get some rest,
Renee
1 -
Two more weeks and I will be done with the project I am on, and in two weeks she will be saying "Don't you have somewhere else to be?"
0 -
That's lovely, real warmth to it. Some wonderful lines, and really relatable. So glad she loved it.
Brilliant job, Barry!
2 -
Thanks Owen, it was a quick write, I only had two lines and built around them in a couple hours start to AI.
0 -
Thanks Bill, it means a lot.
0 -
7 days a week ? Your as bad as me , Sounds good man
0
Howdy, Stranger!