Fate Decided
My thoughts about determinism vs non-determinism.
Not sure about the title.
yes, I know I repeated the rhyming pattern in the chorus. to me it flows....
https://suno.com/song/50d1212e-a4d8-47c0-9fc8-b8cab50420cd
Verse 1:
Journeys into the inner folds of my mind
Travelling the labyrinth as matter unwinds
Eyes blinded by lights of pulsating synapses
Of transmitting signals in lattice collapses
Chorus:
Suspended in life's quickly flowing stream
Carrying me along head in cloudy dreams
Time's illusory nothing is as it seems
Pulling at threads unravelling seams
Verse 2:
A door of shadows past summons me inside
Thoughts and emotions swell and subside
Ghostly photos turn faded black and rust
Ashen memories withered fragments of dust
Chorus:
Suspended in life's quickly flowing stream
Carrying me along head in cloudy dreams
Time's illusory nothing is as it seems
Pulling at threads unravelling seams
Verse 3:
Melting mind transference to my soul
Fragmented pieces separated not whole
On bended knees humbled hands to skies
Self-reflected search for answers why
Chorus:
Suspended in life's quickly flowing stream
Carrying me along head in cloudy dreams
Time's illusory nothing is as it seems
Pulling at threads unravelling seams
[outro]
From cradle to grave pre-plans made
Through life's turbulent waters we wade
Questioning questions when fate decided
Is an errand of fools and deeply misguided
Comments
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Good song Bill. I enjoyed it. Apologies for not commenting on the lyrics, but at my age, I'm struggling to follow anything written in an abstract form. I'll leave that to those with more functioning synapses than me.
Thanks for posting,
Sid
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@sidshovel -how old are you, if you don’t mind me asking0
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@sidshovel -you don’t need to apologize, the fact you took time to listen, i appreciate0
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Don't mind at all Bill, I'm 73 but struggling to remember stuff, I have to keep my songs simple these days and trying to follow anything that doesn't flow in a simplistic form is becoming more difficult for me.
I do really enjoy those pieces of yours I can follow, you do have an original talent. Judging by the feedback many people on this forum agree.
Keep posting.
Sid
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@sidshovel -finally not the oldest in the forum. I’m 60. Sorry to hear about the memory issues, not fun.. again, thanks for taking the time to listen0
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No big deal on ryhme scheme in chorus , it works man , sounds good , if Suno gets any better , I’ll be out of a job lol0
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@ElvisNash - thanks... doubtful,.. :)
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That is some colorful word tapestry, metal is not really my thing but the message is strong here. Keep em coming.0
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I can't tell a AI song from a live track song anymore . So who knows what the future brings on AI songs
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@ElvisNash - you can still hear the synthesized vocals and music. even the best one still sounds the talk box that frampton or chromeo uses..
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I guess sounds good in the car man
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Undecided could be the title0
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