Fate Decided

My thoughts about determinism vs non-determinism.

Not sure about the title.

yes, I know I repeated the rhyming pattern in the chorus. to me it flows....

https://suno.com/song/50d1212e-a4d8-47c0-9fc8-b8cab50420cd


Verse 1:

Journeys into the inner folds of my mind

Travelling the labyrinth as matter unwinds

Eyes blinded by lights of pulsating synapses

Of transmitting signals in lattice collapses


Chorus:

Suspended in life's quickly flowing stream

Carrying me along head in cloudy dreams

Time's illusory nothing is as it seems

Pulling at threads unravelling seams


Verse 2:

A door of shadows past summons me inside

Thoughts and emotions swell and subside

Ghostly photos turn faded black and rust

Ashen memories withered fragments of dust


Chorus:

Suspended in life's quickly flowing stream

Carrying me along head in cloudy dreams

Time's illusory nothing is as it seems

Pulling at threads unravelling seams


Verse 3:

Melting mind transference to my soul

Fragmented pieces separated not whole

On bended knees humbled hands to skies

Self-reflected search for answers why


Chorus:

Suspended in life's quickly flowing stream

Carrying me along head in cloudy dreams

Time's illusory nothing is as it seems

Pulling at threads unravelling seams


[outro]

From cradle to grave pre-plans made

Through life's turbulent waters we wade

Questioning questions when fate decided

Is an errand of fools and deeply misguided

Comments

  • sidshovel
    sidshovel merseyside

    Good song Bill. I enjoyed it. Apologies for not commenting on the lyrics, but at my age, I'm struggling to follow anything written in an abstract form. I'll leave that to those with more functioning synapses than me.

    Thanks for posting,

    Sid

  • @sidshovel -how old are you, if you don’t mind me asking
  • @sidshovel -you don’t need to apologize, the fact you took time to listen, i appreciate
  • sidshovel
    sidshovel merseyside

    Don't mind at all Bill, I'm 73 but struggling to remember stuff, I have to keep my songs simple these days and trying to follow anything that doesn't flow in a simplistic form is becoming more difficult for me.

    I do really enjoy those pieces of yours I can follow, you do have an original talent. Judging by the feedback many people on this forum agree.

    Keep posting.

    Sid

  • @sidshovel -finally not the oldest in the forum. I’m 60. Sorry to hear about the memory issues, not fun.. again, thanks for taking the time to listen
  • ElvisNash
    ElvisNash Calif
    edited January 17
    No big deal on ryhme scheme in chorus , it works man , sounds good , if Suno gets any better , I’ll be out of a job lol
  • @ElvisNash - thanks... doubtful,.. :)

  • Barry
    Barry Florida
    That is some colorful word tapestry, metal is not really my thing but the message is strong here. Keep em coming.
  • @Barry - thanks for the comment :)

  • I can't tell a AI song from a live track song anymore . So who knows what the future brings on AI songs

  • @ElvisNash - you can still hear the synthesized vocals and music. even the best one still sounds the talk box that frampton or chromeo uses..

  • I guess sounds good in the car man

  • Barry
    Barry Florida
    Undecided could be the title
  • @Barry - that sounds better, thanks :)

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