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Re: Crawls and sprawls
@TammyB - this was originally written for a specific person in another forum who, rather than critiqued my lyrics, chose to insult me. one of those days when I was mentally off. (View Post)1 -
Re: Bring Ole School Back
I know what you meant. I grew up in the late 60' - 70's. summers at the beach. and all that. Those were good times. (View Post)1 -
Re: This Ol' Guitar
@HummerWisdom - you are a real singer. your voice is unique, just like janice joplin. it's your voice that gives the songs character. (View Post)1 -
Re: Sailor
@RainbowKeeper - no, I disagree.. it completes the loop. and ends on a statement. there is nothing wrong with the lyrics. it'd be interesting to hear this set to music :) well done (View Post)1 -
Re: Travesty of Love
@HummerWisdom - catchy chorus. you should have different chords or chord progression in the chorus to make it stand out. (View Post)1
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