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Re: Murder Blues
Love the chorus, it's catchy and the bluesy sound in both the original and cover. A few of things that stand out to me, and this is my own In the last line of the chorus, maybe "gone to the grav… (View Post)1 -
Night at the nest
Lyrics - Me; Music - Suno Based on a true story https://suno.com/s/bTXjqCkGmZErCur4 Summer night at a punk club called the nest Friend's band was playin the slam pit was on fire A swirlin mass of elb… (View Post)1 -
Re: Dandelion
Much better, sounds great :) (View Post)1 -
Re: What D'You Think of That?
You seem to be meandering. In verse 4, what do you mean by “what’s the point of that”? Point of what? Also, why doesn’t she get peace from the thought police? And how does “the world’s turned to crap… (View Post)2 -
Re: Dandelion
That's because the syllable count is off and the algorithm is trying shove all that in 4/4 time. what you can do is post your lyrics to chatgpt, gemini, copilot or claude, they parse the lines and te… (View Post)1
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