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I appreciate the heads u…
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Thank you, Robert. I have a great time doing these kinds of recordings and will go acapella next time. I will feel even more free!
No, I do not have permission to use the photos, but I figure I won't get many views because I keep these og…
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Thank you, Chris. I know I'm pushing it with the free flowing strange first draft-ness of this song, but I feel like it will lead to something better.
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Wow, this is one of the most lively and vibrant songs I've heard on a forum. I loved it immediately for its fun energy, great craftsmanship, super vocals and a level of professionalism that is inspiring. Great job and congratulations!
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Hi Chris,
Another well-crafted song in your signature style. I like that you used tarot cards from the major arcana in the lyrics that describe the unattainable "runaround Sue"-type character you speak of. I listened to the SoundCloud ver…
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Thank you, Robert. Yes,…
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Thank you for commenting…
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Thank you, both! I love these rough drafts since I don't know where they can go. I appreciate your comments and feel that life can only get better from here. Hope you're doing great!
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I smiled througout this whole song. Love it! You're right. It's one big cosmic joke and we should all take it lightly. I love the line, "we're all illegals except Native America Sioux." So much craziness in this world. The song reminds me o…
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Very lovely and nostalgic in feeling. Childhood innocence recalled, home and hearth. These are all things that make us feel safe and sound. Beautiful song over all. The 3/4 time makes it all the more charming. Thank you for sharing your achi…
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Thank you Popitup, I wil…
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Thank you Pop it up. I …
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I agree RDM. This is my first draft and I know it will develop into something else in time. Bongos sounds great!
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Very charming song in its simplicity. I enjoyed listening to it and found it uplifting. I'm impressed by your skills and overall vibe. Cheers, HV
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I like how you captured the feeling of chaos and confusion in the rhythm, vocals and instrumentals. Very well done all around and maybe a metaphor for life on earth at the present moment. Cheers, HV
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Thank you RDM and Chris. I love this song and understand why he had to walk away. Retreat is an act of strength. He later came up with his Double Fantasy songs in a matter of a few weeks. Hope you're doing great!
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Very nice, Rene. Love your rendition and all-around impressive. You're an inspiration! Thank you for posting.
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Lovely. I like your take on it and enjoyed it fully. Makes me want to cover it too. Cheers, HV
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Thanks RDM! I grew up i…
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Many thanks all. The reason I don't delve more into the details of this varmint is that it is distasteful for me to do so and animal metaphors are the most endearing way to describe him. I saw him again last night and he kept his distance. May…
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I really like this song - sad, charming, folksy, personal, beautiful. There's something universal about it too. We can all relate to loss on some level. Thank you for posting. It took me somewhere I didn't expect.
Cheers,
Paulin…
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Love it Chris! Very exuberant and fun, as it would be going on an adventure. I feel you're 100% into it. I like the layered vocals and guitar strumming. All around well-crafted.
Cheers,
HV
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Muchas gracias Mora!
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Thank you so much. Sinc…
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Thank you, Elvis Nash!
Many thanks for your comments, CCB. I'll incorporate that change. My website says Paulina Butterfly, Flying Free, so it is appropriate. Peace, love and joy, PB
Thank you, Chris! Yes, we all need our caves of creativity. :) Yours serves you well!
Thank you, RDM! I appreciate your comments. I will look into descending chord runs and try to employ them. This was such a simple song chord-wise. It will evolve over time, I hope!
Howdy, Stranger!