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@carroll - great song.. brilliant lyrics. you are master storytellier
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@HummerWisdom - speaks from the heart as always. I would change the [verse 1 - repeats] make it a bridg…
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@Johnb68 - great song... has a seals and crofts vibe to me :)
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@Johnb68 - you understand that these lyrics are mine and not AI.. the music is AI.. and to be honest, I don't reall…
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Great lyrics and great melody
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@RainyDayMan - Well.. the chorus was actually supposed to be just "time", repeated then I remembered the song…
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@sidshovel - the power of the almighty pen :)
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@sidshovel - I agree.. at, leaves it to how people interpret it to mean.. thanks for the comments,
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@sidshovel - this song turned dark quick :).. excellent writing tho.. tells a story..
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@sidshovel - thanks.. the last line I wasn't sure if I should put in the end or at the end.. I think at the en…
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@HummerWisdom - Renee.. catchy lyrics.. can get stuck in your head :)
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@ElvisNash - great melody.. really love the guitars..
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@ElvisNash - Thanks elvis
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@RainyDayMan - I think this is the perfect solution..
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@OnlyGavin - Thanks for the comment. I wrote this for a specific market.. it's not really wasn't for everybody..…
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@OnlyGavin - Thanks for the comment, normally I agree, but in this case the juxtaposition between the darkness o…
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@RainyDayMan - sorry a bit distracted. my linux box went down and need to reinstall... fun times :)
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@RainyDayMan - both of those comments were made earlier.. before you asked me to stop.. he just responded.. a…
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@RainyDayMan - yes, and you'll notice that i didn't respond, nor will i respond, to Ironknee's comment in his…
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@HummerWisdom - Renee, don't EVER use the word communism to describe my songs at all.
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@HummerWisdom - perhaps.. this really isn't a discussion about religion.. as per in Gender identity Comment by bhengen February 2025
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@Skandha - beautiful song.. well done :)
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Ok. My two cents then I’m going to stop commenting. Rhythm doesn’t mean anything if your distortion and poor recording quality drowns everything out. I would get to a vocal coach to work on your vocals. They are flat and monotonous. Not sure if that…
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@IronKnee , I'll only agree if you agree that my assessment is correct ;)
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@IronKnee - I have an issue on how misguided your lyrics are :)... in your LYRICS and explanation, you are compar…
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@RainyDayMan - Ok.. it's just that I know the sentiment of some members, and prefer not to see them :)... the…
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@robwills - most of your issues is with over distortion drowning everything out.. in my opinion.. to me this so…
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@ElvisNash - if you're asking me, no, I know your stance on AI.. this is directed at Tom, if you're not asking …
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@robwills - you may not like AI, but you can still comment on the lyrics themselves. Your assessment about AI I…
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